I have planted my best seeds in barren ground
Love is like light
You absorb some of it
Reflect some of it
And refract the rest
Not long ago we were on the same starting point in a circular course
But we were facing opposite directions
Now we approach meeting in the middle
Best if we collided and dwelled on a common point again
Else our meeting would be fleeting
And you’d become me and I you
And such a sad painful life it would be
If it’s your love that ends up silently shining into dark space.
Same sad life now, only for longer and for ever
Vacuum
Poetic, as should poetry.
This is nice.
nice…well done
waaa waaa just when i was enjoying this poem, the thing ends? What kind of one minute… poem?
Thanks @chemokpobi and @topazo. And @nicolebassey. The poem wasn’t really meant to be creative per se. It was exactly what was going on with me at the time. It’s about my fiancee and I can’t afford it to be too long. I wrote it in five minutes.
This is really an amateur writer but that is a nice place to kick off… actually better than where i kicked off.
Awwww.. I wish you well, Vessuci. may she water that which you’ve planted so you both could watch it grow.
Well done. $ß.
Thanks @sibbylwhyte. That’s sweet of you
Your imageries are fantastic, well done
Still looking for something bad to say about this…Hehehehe