I have planted my best seeds in barren ground

Love is like light

You absorb some of it

Reflect some of it

And refract the rest

Not long ago we were on the same starting point in a circular course

But we were facing opposite directions

Now we approach meeting in the middle

Best if we collided and dwelled on a common point again

Else our meeting would be fleeting

And you’d become me and I you

And such a sad painful life it would be

If it’s your love that ends up silently shining into dark space.

Same sad life now, only for longer and for ever


9 thoughts on “Vacuum” by vescucci (@vescucci)

  1. Poetic, as should poetry.

    This is nice.

  2. nice…well done

  3. Sunshine (@nicolebassey)

    waaa waaa just when i was enjoying this poem, the thing ends? What kind of one minute… poem?

  4. Thanks @chemokpobi and @topazo. And @nicolebassey. The poem wasn’t really meant to be creative per se. It was exactly what was going on with me at the time. It’s about my fiancee and I can’t afford it to be too long. I wrote it in five minutes.

  5. Fadehan Adeoshun (@Fadehan)

    This is really an amateur writer but that is a nice place to kick off… actually better than where i kicked off.

  6. Awwww.. I wish you well, Vessuci. may she water that which you’ve planted so you both could watch it grow.
    Well done. $ß.

  7. Thanks @sibbylwhyte. That’s sweet of you

  8. Your imageries are fantastic, well done

  9. Still looking for something bad to say about this…Hehehehe

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