My lips speak earnestly
to make them see.
Their eyes are wide open
but blanketed in mist
The rape of love and trust
around us- is not a fallacy
Their eyes sees it clearly
but they refuse to believe.
Their porous brain
accepts without a thought
what they are told
by the faceless men.
Although even if those men had faces
they (my people) will still be blind
to the truth a clear mist
to all with foresight.
Nice write, your thoughts are always thoughtfull and vividly deep.
Check this poem and tell me your thoughts on it.
http://www.naijastories.com/2013/03/cosmos-in-trance/
Straightforward poem, @hafsah18.
I didn’t quite get the meaning of the title phrase, “Clear mist”.
Also, watch out for typos like “their eyes sees”.