Blood on the Dancefloor: The Comeback

You get back on your feet, nose bleeding and totally humiliated, you loathe the DJ’s well-timed sense of irony as he switches the music to…wait for it… Michael Jackson’s ‘Blood on the dancefloor’. But you suddenly realize that this is the big break you’ve been waiting for! Thats the kind of music you can step to, not ‘Say My Name’. They’ll be ‘saying YOUR name’ by the time you’re done. You’re going to redeem your image, silence the hecklers, and give your dancing partner a wacko-jacko experience she will never forget.

First you pop up and down a few times in succession while your legs are ‘at ease’. The crowd is already beginning to cheer. You stop crotch-popping and start to gyrate on the spot, your eyes firmly fixed on your dancing adversary. The ‘Wooo!’s and whistles from the ladies around are overwhelming. You snap-wiggle your leg in the air then you strut your way over to her and push your waist up against hers. Her lips part. You take her right hand up and whisper to her, ‘It’s going down, babe’.

You spin her around and then you both put on an electrifying, neomodern salsa performance. The uproar from the crowd is unprecedented. You catch a glimpse of some beautiful ladies biting their bottom lips. Some are winking at you and pouting seductively. You know you look bad and dangerous with your sweaty silk shirt and bloody nose. The alluring scent of your dance partner’s perfume brings you back into focus though.

You  ‘crip-walk’ around her, like a deranged Red-Indian around a bonfire, snapping your head aback along the way. After one complete revolution you do a lightning spin and execute the Billie-Jean Toe stand – applause aplenty! You grab her upclose one more time. This time you can feel her heart beating fast. It will all be over soon but not after you give the audience what you know they’ve been craving for. Tonight you will leave your mark as the undisputed dance maestro, the dancefloor will worship your feet, and your N18,000 loafers will be put to the ultimate test!

You take a step back, arms stretched out in front and pulling her gently towards you. You start to backslide slowly and she instinctively comes towards you. You pick up the pace and her salsa-strut is perfectly in synch. Never before have you performed the Moonwalk while still holding your leading lady. It’s absolute pandemonium now and you can see the club’s bouncers on red alert. Your friends are chanting your name and then the whole club joins in – even the DJ. In a Tango Neuvo approach, you lean her forward so that her back is arched and she has an inverted view of the audience. She’s breathless. You’re exhausted. The crowd loved it. You pull her back up and she asks you, ‘Where did THAT come from?’ You say nothing but smile. She then whispers in your ear, ‘I wanna rock your world…’

One long kiss and three Trojans later, you wake up. You’re in her apartment. You can still see your silk shirt hanging across the bedroom. You’re both so cosy under the sheets and she’s got her head on your chest. You notice a picture frame by your side of the bed and it’s faced down. You’re thinking you probably bumped it during the hanky-panky. She also wakes up shortly after and she asks you for the time. You look at your watch – It’s almost 2am. She suddenly panicks and tells you to get dressed.

You put two and two together and you pick up the picture frame to notice she’s in the picture with a huge, built-up bloke. ‘Who’s he?’ She tells you its her husband and that he’ll be back any minute. You suddenly hear a knock on the door. You’ve had your fun with dirty Diana but you don’t want to see blood in the bedroom. You haven’t got time to throw your clothes on. There’s a window to your left and you’re only one storey off the ground. It’s time to beat it!



14 thoughts on “Blood on the Dancefloor: The Comeback” by jollof (@jollof213)

  1. He is a BAD guy…you should not let the man catch him o…
    Nice one Jollof…Well done…$ß.

    1. Thanks @sibbylwhyte. I’ll leave the ending to your imagination. Congrats on making the top three in the TOS contest :)

      1. Let him jump off and break his bones…Nah….I need him to still be able to do dem moves…he will jump into the refuse dump truck…

        Thanks a lot jollof…I appreciate.

  2. lol beta Beat It before it will turn to thriller. as a badt guy! but Jollof sweaty silk shirt and bleeding nose = yuck!
    u beta be aguy to have written that.
    how u describe dance moves so beautifully only goes to show ur a brilliant writer

  3. Hahahahaha. This was a really comeback. Enjoyed it.

  4. No be small dancing tutorial be this, I’ll try the moves some day…
    I like this Jollof. You’re good.

  5. You sure know your steps.
    Nice one.

  6. Interesting… well written again.

  7. you had better be as good a dancer as your descriptions…you just have to be. well done, jollof. You used your words powerfully

  8. Lol… I really liked this. You’ve a good descriptive power :-)

  9. lol. let him catch you.

  10. Great comeback… great dance descriptions… loved the MJ references, too!

    Well done, @jollof213.

  11. Good for the dude.

  12. I LOVE THIS. Hmmm…you must be a really good dancer o.

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