Woman

Woman


HER
Ovaries are fighting
Now, a war of two cities
Bloodbath in-between

BIRTH
Labour “Laws” come tough
Constrictions at intervals
Baby cries, both sleeps

BODY
The architects failed
Angelo could not draw this…
This accurate piece.



10 thoughts on “Woman” by JAY'S PLANET (@JaysPLANET)

  1. This is barely 37-words…how did it get posted?

    but i like sha

  2. @teewah, maybe our cries have been heard.

    Interesting.

    1. hehehe AMEN O!!!

  3. @teewah@babyada know what’s funny?
    My post got thrown back in my face by @Admin.
    No reasons whatsoever given, and I am sure I didn’t write shorter than this.

  4. However, length is not to be used ever as a yardstick for measuring poetry. Whaetever@Admin was thinking abt I have no idea. Still don’t.
    Glad tho’ this work here didn’t disappoint or lay credence to a need for lengthy stuffs.

  5. Hmm…Interesting.

  6. Stroke of luck perhaps, but then again it says a lot for a ‘short’ poem..Nice Jayp..Well done.

  7. Wow, I thought this was off the publishing list. Yeah @sibbylwhyte it was a stroke of luck :-) Thanks all for liking.

  8. Okay, I guess this is an example of a haiku poem I asked about sometime ago. Nice.

  9. It’s a nice poem.

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