Wish you were Here

I wish that you were here with me

so that the world I can clearly see

because every time you are far away

my feet always tend to sway.

 

I wish that you were here with me

so that my all to life, I can give

because every time there is no you

the way to live, I loose a clue.

 

I wish that you were here with me

so that loneliness can let me be

because the very moment your dear face fades

is when my own heart shuts its gates.

 

I wish that you were here with me

so that my heart can again beat

because every time you come around

my swaying feet, seems to find the ground.

 

I wish that you were here with me

so that my heart can with love beat

because every moment I spend with you

is like a lifelong dream come true.

 

I wish that you were here with me

so that my tears will at last cease

because every time spent by your side

I feel unashamed… no need to hide

 

I wish that you were here with me

so that my life can be complete

because its only when I look in your eyes

do I feel as though I am alive.



24 thoughts on “Wish you were Here” by teewah (@teewah)

  1. All these lovers seff. Feb 14 is just a day.
    Haba!

    1. lol. but after vals day, the love lingers

  2. Feel like I’ve read this before…

    1. hmmmm let me think….either my blog, facebook or twitter. outside of those, I doubt you have!

      1. Honestly. Really. Seriously.

        It’s nice though.

        1. *laughing* its cool….Thanks

          1. @Seun, not for the first time, I share the feeling…
            It really feels like something I have read before….Nice.

  3. I like the poem..and it’s rhyming scheme is cool..
    Nice one!..

  4. Am a hopeless romantic….got me with the very first line.
    More please………love is so comforting.

  5. I wish you were here
    to whisper to my ear

    That it was written for me
    Ton let loneliness Flee.

    Nice one it is.

    Bu be sure to make the dictions more imagery and mind blowing.

    God job

  6. i comment my reserve!

    1. when will u reserve ur comment?

  7. To say I didn’t enjoy the poem for its simplicity would be lying.
    Still, I think there was something missing…like I have heard and read this often….
    Might be the reason for the feeling that @Seun also says…
    I think a little something should be added. What? Maybe deeper imagery to show the nostalgia and
    missings…Just my thougts…
    Teewah…Well done.

    1. ok then will try n tie loose ends. thanks

  8. I love this, for its simplicity and that one can relate to it. Watch them typos, saw loose somewhere and it ought to be lose.

    Well done!!!

  9. Surprise. Surprise.
    Hmm. What more to say….Love is always a classic.
    There are many ways to write about it.
    What I read is more of musings, no attempts to embellish anything. So, I will follow a few who have said this is “from the heart” hahaha

    1. @shaifamily Okay boss….(sowee just had to bring it on NS)

      1. Know places to ‘catch’ u. Ur apology is lost on me, ma.

        1. ah …now am scared o!

  10. Me?
    You mean mee?

    Sweet song.

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