Pweety Lass

Pweety Lass

Do you know the pweety lass?

With the shining black rimmed glass.

Every time she passes by,

Everyone stares and goes O my!

 

Don’t you know the pweety lass?

With the shining black rimmed glass.

She draws with her light pen so well,

From where she learnt no one can tell

 

Have you seen the pweety lass?

With the shining black rimmed glass.

Such pretty straight legs she’s got

At times me thinks she’s but a god

 

Haven’t you seen the pweety lass?

With the shining black rimmed glass.

All around her is light so bright,

Glowing from her whitened teeth

 

Lemme tell you ‘bout the pweety lass,

With the shining black rimmed glass.

Some men say she’s full of s_ _t,

But I say she’ll soon be a big hit

 

So if you see the pweety lass,

With the shining black rimmed glass.

From me please give a warm wet kiss,

And tell her how much her verve I miss



15 thoughts on “Pweety Lass” by tomi (@tomi)

  1. What a pweety likul poem!
    I like the flow and the rhymes.
    It is also musical.

  2. shai (@shaifamily)

    looooooooooool. I seen her, at the corner store. A dime for the info, mista!

  3. okay.
    passes by? goes by?

    when I finish chewing on this poem, I’d get bk 2 u cos I think u’r “crushing” on some chick.

  4. Crushing? someone even told me it describes Asa the musician.

  5. Nice one. but am not clear on this one “At times me thinks she’s but a god”, maybe “goddess” should replace “god”

  6. That’s the creative license. The subtle undertone is that although it’s a she, but there is a masculinity in her as expressed by the word god and not goddess and that’s why she’s pweety and not pretty.

  7. Are you talking about me? Lol.
    Lovely pweety poem. If i see your pweety lass, i’ll be sure to kidnap her and hold her for a hefty ransom

    1. I’ll sure tell the IG of Police about you! lol thanx for reading my write.

  8. Descriptive. I feel her verve too.

  9. The black rimmed glasses give you away. it must be Asa, :)

    1. Now you know the pweety lass
      with the shining black rimmed glass
      she strums the guitar so so well
      from were she learnt no one can tell.

  10. It is not Asa, she isn’t a pweety Lass.

    1. Asa is damn pretty to me….as in damnedest pretty

  11. wow. you nailed this one real hard. the repetitions really smoothies it over …very simple and musical…well done

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