My Disappointment, My hope

My Disappointment, My hope

My life is so unbelievable
I thought I could make it understandable

Treasure me so much,we fuse
Colour our feelings in a colour we use

Now that is a thought that keeps me hoping
While in my quiet moments I fear losing

In the sky, I see you and I
Don’t just act it,say it looking me in the eye

Overwhelmed with all these feelings I posses
I fear that I’m obsessed

You made me feel larger than life
Now,all you’ve given me is grief

So much expectations I had for you
All that remains are past glories of you

I wake up vowing to steer clear of you all who destroyed me
As I have come to the realisation that you sponged off me

A shadow of myself, yet I still stand
What is your endgame? Take my hand?

Will it make any difference?
In the face of  this decadence?

So many questions
So little attention



7 thoughts on “My Disappointment, My hope” by 2cute4u (@2cute4u)

  1. Take my hand? If that wasn’t intended to be a powerful line, then me’s interpetini the poem differently. Good poem. Really emotional.

  2. Thank you so much.. To be honest, this is one poem I wrote that gave me ‘a little’ stress finishing it..
    Thank you so very much

  3. So what’s the poem about?

  4. my emotions were scattered when I wrote this, really.

  5. 2cute: this poem is heavily laced with emotions; deep ones. Emotions of disappointment (quite an apt title too), hurt, pain, hazy thoughts etc. I understand when you say your emotions were pretty scattered when you wrote this. It shows right through the poem. Well done still. Must have been a tough situation at the time.

  6. Hmmm,truly emotional piece.
    i read pain and dissapointment in tween its lines.
    nice poem.

  7. @2cute4u This poem is really too cute to be considered less emotional… it caught me in the neck to read on and on…

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