My life is so unbelievable
I thought I could make it understandable
Treasure me so much,we fuse
Colour our feelings in a colour we use
Now that is a thought that keeps me hoping
While in my quiet moments I fear losing
In the sky, I see you and I
Don’t just act it,say it looking me in the eye
Overwhelmed with all these feelings I posses
I fear that I’m obsessed
You made me feel larger than life
Now,all you’ve given me is grief
So much expectations I had for you
All that remains are past glories of you
I wake up vowing to steer clear of you all who destroyed me
As I have come to the realisation that you sponged off me
A shadow of myself, yet I still stand
What is your endgame? Take my hand?
Will it make any difference?
In the face of this decadence?
So many questions
So little attention
Take my hand? If that wasn’t intended to be a powerful line, then me’s interpetini the poem differently. Good poem. Really emotional.
Thank you so much.. To be honest, this is one poem I wrote that gave me ‘a little’ stress finishing it..
Thank you so very much
So what’s the poem about?
my emotions were scattered when I wrote this, really.
2cute: this poem is heavily laced with emotions; deep ones. Emotions of disappointment (quite an apt title too), hurt, pain, hazy thoughts etc. I understand when you say your emotions were pretty scattered when you wrote this. It shows right through the poem. Well done still. Must have been a tough situation at the time.
Hmmm,truly emotional piece.
i read pain and dissapointment in tween its lines.
nice poem.
@2cute4u This poem is really too cute to be considered less emotional… it caught me in the neck to read on and on…