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yetitweets @yetunde

active 1 year, 10 months ago 403pts Rank - Newbie
Ok, this is my first time of publicizing my work, in a sense. I am hoping to get independent, no-holds barred feedback, so I can get better. NB: I’m a worse critic than most of you, so please, give it to me! lol! View
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    yetitweets wrote a new post, Turntables 9 months ago

    She sensed it the minute she stepped into the house. Tonight was going to be different. Her hair stood on her skin as she realised she was already reacting to him. Her lips were suddenly dry. Her heart beat in […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, Bleeding Heart 1 year, 3 months ago

    I’d rather have a bleeding heart

    than none at all

    You have chosen to stay the part

    I’ve moved down the hall

    the emptiness inside you

    freezes all around me

    but still my heart bleeds

    and so I […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, New Beginnings – The End 1 year, 3 months ago

    Banke sat up on her bed suddenly.
    She was tucked in with her favorite Stephen King piece and something in the plot, got her thinking. It had been 5 months since Femi waltzed back into her life and stole her son’s […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, Trial on error 1 year, 3 months ago

    “I felt like I was too broken inside to articulate any form of wholeness. I had nothing to say”
    “Is that why you did nothing, when you realized, as you claimed, that the deceased was not pretending but was […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, When it rains 1 year, 3 months ago

    When it rains, it certainly pours.

    As a kid, I never liked the rain. When all my friends sang and romped in the cold showers, I always stayed far away under some type of covering. My mother joked that I was […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, Streaks of sunlight at dawn 2 1 year, 3 months ago

    Athena stepped out of the Limousine and smiled at the elderly porter.

    “Hello James! How are you today?”

    “Very well ma’am. it’s a bright and sunny day!”

    She smiled a response and walked briskly into the […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, New Beginings – 3 1 year, 3 months ago

    They say some love stories were made in heaven. Well, some are not, some are made here on earth by the characters themselves choosing to give in, compromise and stay with what matters. Femi and Banke are one of […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, Homecoming 1 year, 3 months ago

    The room had all the finery from the magazines. She never thought that her ‘family’ would be one of those who lived la vida loca in the midst of the prevalent poverty in Nigeria. “What was the current ranking?” […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, Just another day 1 year, 3 months ago

    Mummy came home early from the hospital today. She said she had her posting changed. Something about a break out of water borne diseases in the area the day before. She said patients were brought in in droves. She […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, Last Night 3 1 year, 3 months ago

    I woke up and stretched lazily on the unfamiliar bed. I was not on my bed. My room mate was out for the weekend, but had left her keys in our hiding place. I was not on hers too. Our beds felt harder, no bounce […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, New Beginnings – 4 1 year, 5 months ago

    They say some love stories were made in heaven. Well, some are not, some are made here on earth by the characters themselves choosing to give in, compromise and stay with what matters. Femi and Banke are one of […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new post, Build 1 year, 7 months ago

    I’m building my life with you
    building my wishes to dreams come true
    Tying and meshing
    and all the right rest is
    leading me straight to you
    I’m reaching far deep within
    Reaching for depths to lead me to […]

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    yetitweets wrote a new blog post: Sunstreaks of Sunlight at Dawn 8 2 years, 6 months ago

    The next few weeks were the most uneventful of Athena’s 31 years. Her trip to London was for business, but it proved to be more of a get away. Six weeks went by in a flash and it was, once again time to go home. this time, up town L.A. The walk into the very [...]

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    yetitweets wrote a new blog post: Sunstreaks of Sunlight at Dawn 7 2 years, 6 months ago

    Athena sat in the British Airways VIP lounge while waiting her flight. It was a busy day at Muritala Muhamed Airport, but she could have been there alone. She heard nothing, only the timed sequenced of her breathing. In and out, in and out. She had to keep breathing, it showed she could keep living. [...]

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post Streaks of sunlight at dawn 6 2 years, 7 months ago

    Phew! Was afraid this wasn’t going to get any thumb-ups… the girl get issues o! lol!
    @mercy – the italics was used for some kinda detachment. Jus as Seun explained
    @ Seun, thanks for getting the flow, my man!
    @Lade darling… I honestly have no idea how she’s gonna… let’s hope she doesn’t sink…

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    yetitweets wrote a new blog post: Streaks of sunlight at dawn 6 2 years, 7 months ago

    The flight was as stressful as she thought it would be. Athena hadn’t flown economy class in years. But Toke didn’t see the reason why Athena would spend additional money upgrading the twins to business class. And there was no leaving them either, so it was economy for all. The best they got were seat [...]

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post KILL CRUISE 2 years, 7 months ago

    LOL!!!! LMHO!!!! ROFLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!

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    yetitweets and AnnaBella are now friends 2 years, 7 months ago

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    yetitweets wrote a new blog post: Streaks of sunlight at dawn 4 2 years, 7 months ago

    “Someone tell me how you deal with a past you have never wanted to deal with but keeps dealing with you? I know, it doesn’t make sense what I just said. But it does. How in heavens do I handle this whole Nigeria visit?”…[Read more]

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post Corporate Affairs Series – Gabriella 2 2 years, 7 months ago

    Aahhh…. Marya….

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    yetitweets wrote a new blog post: Streaks of sunlight at dawn 3 2 years, 7 months ago

    The year was 1994 and Athena was home alone. Toke and Tireni had gone to Philadelphia to spend the Christmas break. Tireni was due back in two weeks. Toke, however was going to stay a bit a longer. She wasn’t sure if Tomide was going to come home this time with Toke or go back to [...]

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post Streaks of sunlight at dawn 5 2 years, 7 months ago

    Yeah, wasn’t counting on that actually. It’s funny how words you did not plan on writing create and convey moods you did not even think about. I’m begining to think that the gift of writing is a spirit!lol! It possessed me with this one, I swear! lol! But basically, I was trying to show how [...]

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post Streaks of sunlight at dawn 5 2 years, 7 months ago

    Oh wow… thank you!

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post Last Night 3 2 years, 7 months ago

    eerr.. the focus of the story was on what they did… lol! If you read the prequels, you’ll prob see why..

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post Streaks of sunlight at dawn 5 2 years, 7 months ago

    Flash fiction does that to you, i gess.. lol! thanks for the like!

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post Streaks of sunlight at dawn 5 2 years, 7 months ago

    Yeah, kinda… jus showing presence jare, don’t mind me. Thanks for the like

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post WHEN THE GREEN STORM CALMS 2 years, 7 months ago

    lol! Nice one!

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post Lonely Hearts… 2 years, 7 months ago

    I like this, very much. I like the fact that you went beyond the ‘Independence day’ thingy and got down to the lives of the people in the ‘independent’ country. I really really like that. Good job!

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post MY INDEPENDENCE DAY 2 years, 7 months ago

    Nice one! You seem to have a thing for te mind of a child… I like!

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    yetitweets commented on the blog post Electronic Freedom 2 years, 7 months ago

    wow!!!!! captivating! I love it! Well done!

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