@laworemike thanks for reading. Glad you liked it

@kaycee,I appreciate your words. Yeah, I could have fared better without the extra ‘do’ but I intentionally placed it. The message of this piece needed that extra ‘do.’ Thanks for stopping by.

@topazo, Thanks for reading. Glad you stopped by

@Babalolaibisola Stunning brother. I despise this piece because I did not write lol. Just joking. But truly your definition of love is something I relate to. People often misinterpret love, they watch movies, and […]

@TolaO Thanks for stopping by. Yeah, at times my wordings can be too condensed, eventhough I purposely choose them. Its something i’m working hard to perfect. I will be using the minimalism approach from now on, […]

@Hymar. no brother. I definitely did not have you in mind. A girl was in my mind when I wrote this. Thanks for reading

@Seun-Odukoya thanks for reading, I believe the theme is strong in this one though not clear which is mainly due to the title of the theme “Love.” The imagery painted was exactly what I had experienced but I could […]

@isaac82 thanks men

@sibbylwhyte thanks for reading..I did not edit this properly, regardless corrections taken.

@kingobozy thanks bro, I’m glad you liked it..

@newreign thanks alot men..

@sibbylwhyte why you wan make person head burst. Thanks for stopping by, as always much appreciated

@topazo thanks men

@sibbylwhyte thanks for reading. Glad your enjoyed reading it

@jaywriter, when I wrote this, we did not have a proper stage to perform, so I had to improvise and make do with what we had. Thanks for reading

@Olan thanks, well when I wrote, i intended for Salope to free style because, the actor that was to play Salope is an upcoming hip hop musician.

@Seun-Odukoya spot on observation, scar is a reference to the character Tony Montana from the movie “Scarface”. Yes the picture i had on my mind was a blur.

@sibbylwhyte thanks for reading. Well it’s about life before birth, before souls are locked into senses. Thanks again

@TolaO, true the story did not advance, this part was more like an updated part 2; growth in character. As always I appreciate your suggestions.

@chemokopi I finally read it. tragic..the twist was swift and unexpected. To be honest, I could not invest for all the characters, mainly due to the length of the story. All in all, your message was received, and […]

@TolaO spot on brother. That was what I was trying to paint. Thanks for reading, your insights are always welcome

@Fadehan thanks for reading, i enjoyed dissecting your comment, and it’s awesome to read that you understood what I was aiming for. I will make sure my words are arranged properly, too much disjointedness can […]

@TolaO,
thanks for reading, that line in particular was one of my favorite. No one knows what a drunk will spill out next, so i believe even the little things will catch the attention of a drunk. Giving the cat a […]

@Seun-Odukoya. Oh, I am talking about racism, which is something I experience first hand almost everyday.

@sibbylwhyte haba, why i go wan confuse my NS people lol. thanks..No worry, i plan to take a break on the abstract way I go about my poetry, but there will be some of my works that will only work in the abstract […]

@sibbylwhyte complaint chip..lol, yes the setting looks Mericanized, but my inspiration was from a city in naija. I will smoothen out the setting and feel in upcoming episodes.