@vincentdepaul
active 4 years, 9 months ago-
Vincent de Paul posted an update 4 years, 9 months ago
My novel, TWISTED TIMES: Son of Man is out: You can grab a copy on Amazon and other bookstores, and Kindle. http://www.amazon.com/gp/offer-listing/1516829794/ref=tmm_pap_new_olp_0?ie=UTF8&condition=new&qid=1460511432&sr=1-6
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Memoirs of A Repentant Slut ~ Episode 14 4 years, 9 months ago
A nice story, however the suspense created by the first paragraph wanes at the story goes on. Consider shortening the episode.
Then there is the overuse of adverbs – bad for a story, and it’s old fashioned. […]
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Abducted #13 5 years ago
Action packed. The kind of stories I like . Keep it up
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Love Like A Fairytale (Finale/Episode 7: Farewell) 5 years ago
Good.
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Forbidden Love (episode 5) 5 years ago
@ojestar…. Perhaps yoe used to your ego being massaged, but a reader’s opinion is theirs. Dont hunt me down for that and kill me for that like that Polish writer. If i find a work bad i say it, no sugarcoating. […]
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Blackout (1) 5 years ago
A seemingly weak attempt at flash fiction. Give us something to hold on to so as to read blackout2
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, That Day 5 years ago
Intriguing
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Love Like A Fairytale (Episode 6: Deeds of the past) 5 years ago
Nice
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, The Angel She Knew 5 years ago
It would have been a nice story were the writer showed instead of telling. I give a weak one star.
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Forbidden Love (episode 5) 5 years ago
Apart from agreeing with @namdi, as a reader i feel my intelligence is insulted. Writing. ….POV is telling, not showing. The writer even knows the story is bad, ends up hoping it is not as bed. It is bad, […]
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Temptation at TBS 5 years, 4 months ago
Interesting.
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Gamble 5 years, 4 months ago
True. The line between good and bad is blurred, too bad many a time bad seems to win.
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, The Rape Of Innocence 5 years, 4 months ago
Hehehe. Lovely. Growth. The inevitable.
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Klepto 5 years, 4 months ago
A great poem. Loved it.
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Diary of a Rogue Priest: Time to Change? 5 years, 4 months ago
@majiri, sadly the Church is dying, what with Pope Francis welcoming gays (who have been sodomizing altar boys in silence) and calling all those who have aborted to go back to the priests who impregnated them for […]
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Diary of a Rogue Priest: Time to Change? 5 years, 4 months ago
@gmoney. You are right. Instead of living a double life you should do your homework well. It’s from experience.
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Vincent de Paul commented on the post, Diary of a Rogue Priest: Time to Change? 5 years, 4 months ago
Yes, they are not any less human. There is no one that is without sin. Thank you @stanfuto
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Vincent de Paul wrote a new post, Diary of a Rogue Priest: Time to Change? 5 years, 4 months ago
Break up is never easy, even if you are a priest. Honest-to-God, it has not been easy knowing that Shiri walked out on me, and the reality of it makes it worse.
It’s hard to walk away, you know, especially w […]
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