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topazo commented on the post, What it means to be the Head In Marriage 16 hours, 32 minutes ago

@kodeya that’s the spirit…lol

topazo commented on the post, What it means to be the Head In Marriage 16 hours, 33 minutes ago

@elovepoetry thanks for reading and commenting..

topazo commented on the post, Oppression 16 hours, 41 minutes ago

@babalolaibisola thanks for reading…..

topazo commented on the post, The Tattooed Prostitute 2 days, 15 hours ago

lol…very funny. the sins people hide under the religious cloak.
nice story, the narrative could be better, watch out for typos, wrong use of words and tenses.
well done.

topazo commented on the post, Musings Of A Hustler (episode 22) 2 days, 15 hours ago

and the real hustling begins…

topazo commented on the post, The Piano Book: Part 1 2 days, 15 hours ago

something is brewing….and it looks sinister

topazo commented on the post, Black Chronicles: Interrogation 2 days, 15 hours ago

nice work as always

topazo commented on the post, The Tale of Aikume…Part One 2 days, 15 hours ago

hmmm…..lets see where this is heading

topazo commented on the post, Misty Clouds 2 days, 15 hours ago

nice

topazo commented on the post, An airport, five countries and a tale…AOk 2 days, 16 hours ago

beautiful story…

topazo commented on the post, Sin 9 3 days, 3 hours ago

tight indeed it is…

topazo commented on the post, Treading water 3 days, 3 hours ago

wow…kids! i cant imagine how the poor woman would have felt….
nice story. well done
when the ogas at the top @nicolebassey and @kaycee have spoken, there is nothing left to add…

topazo commented on the post, My HIV Story – 1 3 days, 4 hours ago

oookay…what happened again?

topazo commented on the post, How To Make A Difference In My Communitty 3 days, 4 hours ago

i love the idea behind this write up but the execution was poor. first you need to follow a train of thought and build up your point s but that was lacking in this piece. Also, your essay should not revolve around […]

topazo commented on the post, Raising A Godly Child 3 days, 4 hours ago

nice message but this doesnt read like poetry. @xikay has said it all.

topazo commented on the post, Judge’s Comments on Shortlisted Stories for the What If Contest 3 days, 4 hours ago

this was a good analysis…well done judge…

topazo commented on the post, Nene’s Choice – Chapter 4 3 days, 4 hours ago

i am loving this story more and more….you go on girl…

topazo commented on the post, That place, Someplace 3 days, 5 hours ago

”home is where you are free” i like that line a lot…

topazo commented on the post, Stealth and wooden mask 3 days, 5 hours ago

i quite agree with @kaycee about the title…but the story is real nice. a few typos here and there…well done!

topazo commented on the post, A Suicide Note 3 days, 5 hours ago

na wa for u o! u claim to be in love with ur girlfriend and yet u are wishing that ur first love realize how much u love her and give u a chance…js hope ur girlfriend is not reading this…u might js commit that […]

topazo commented on the post, What it means to be the Head In Marriage 3 days, 16 hours ago

@francis you are right, there seems to be a lot of role confusion these days, and that is why the societal values are disintegrating too…the family is the core of the society. we need to retrace our steps and […]

topazo commented on the post, What it means to be the Head In Marriage 3 days, 16 hours ago

@AlabaOk even in a changing world, the family unit should still be preserved. and the man as head is responsible for holding the family together. no matter how busy we are our, our core values should be ”family first”

topazo commented on the post, When do the birds do come 3 days, 23 hours ago

nice one

topazo commented on the post, When do the birds do come 3 days, 23 hours ago

my thoughts exactly

topazo commented on the post, What it means to be the Head In Marriage 3 days, 23 hours ago

@ayomitans thanks a bunch!

topazo commented on the post, What it means to be the Head In Marriage 3 days, 23 hours ago

@kaycee and yours is a very big head…lol

topazo commented on the post, You did not come… 4 days ago

this is good…real good.

topazo commented on the post, Fortitude – Episode 5 4 days ago

i am enjoying the story more and more…keep it coming