I like the informal style of writing. But if you are choosing to talk about a matter, don’t give us the impression that you are not comfortable talking about it. If need be, go into details and don’t shy away. […]

Hmm… Nice as usual

Nice

Wow…

Lol… Scrap NYSC huh? God speed

Beautiful!

Nice lines…

Deep words… I like

Well written..

Nice

Hmm…

Lol! Poor Eze…

The ending was a bit confusing… And I feel u cld Hv written ds better

Beautiful… And the ending was nice.

Em.. This was riddled with typos…
Then ur choice of words were inaccurate sometimes e. g clarion noise…

Words like “bloke” “lass” are slangs and didn’t fit into the writing style

Then ur sentence […]

Biting more than he can chew…

Pls work on ur stories more…. There were a lot of errors in this one

Fast paced….. You need to flesh out your stories more
Well done

The first few lines were nice… You can do better than this…. Well done

Interesting read… Well done

Oh dear Lord!

I ditto @nicolebassey
Well done

@olan well articulated and well said….
@yeniee lol @ur comments, u wer rly riled up….love ur comments abt ur purpose extending beyond the bed and kitchen….women are so much more…

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the concept was nice, the execution was poor. there were typos, wrong punctuation and tense mixups. the dialogue was unreal. then the presentation was not reader friendly: the dialogue should have been separated, […]

this is nice

this looks rushed to me….you skipped a lot of details. how did she deal with her feces soiled dress? im sure she wont have worn the clothes all day…

@nicolebassey wow! Beautiful… Heart of gold Uv gt indeed… I daresay u r a queen…

@sambrightomo welcome back from the dead… lol

Nice

Beautiful lines…

Interesting…