Tee Akindele Activity Streams

Tee Akindele wrote a new post, Your back is turned on me 1 year, 3 months ago

Your back-side always had it’s appeal
I liked to watch your comely shape
Melt into the shadows;
I liked the juicing of adrenaline,
As I chased you into the dark
The rush, as I closed in on you
I was your […]

Tee Akindele wrote a new post, My Beauty Queen 1 year, 3 months ago

I don’t know what may happen if you entered for a beauty pageant
Gladly, it doesn’t matter here
[Placing my right hand across my chest and over my heart]
Here there’s only one crown, one judge and one […]

Tee Akindele wrote a new post, Deep Kiss 1 year, 3 months ago

Your lips are like smooth pebbles
Washed out and shining on the river bank
Their parting is like the freshness
Frothing on the surface of the ocean
Calling me for a cool dip or a warm plunge
Depending on […]

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post You Have To Live 2 years ago

Very nice read Berry… very witty writeup!

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Poem: The red eyes of Lagos 2 years ago

Thanks a lot Seun!

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Poem: The red eyes of Lagos 2 years ago

I’m glad you think so. Thanks

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Poem: The red eyes of Lagos 2 years ago

Thanks Paul, how do you do?

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Poem: The red eyes of Lagos 2 years ago

Thanks for the comment Myne, I’m particularly happy you like this one though it’s not romance . As for the second paragraph, well, I feel you’re being very socially conscious in reading the poem too; LOL, thanks again plenty ma.

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Poem: The red eyes of Lagos 2 years ago

Hehehe! I’m sure you can figure how area boys soon become area men o!

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Poem: The red eyes of Lagos 2 years ago

Thankss man, this area boy now feels very proud. LOL

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Poem: The red eyes of Lagos 2 years ago

Thanks Mercy! I’m glad you love it

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Poem: The red eyes of Lagos 2 years ago

Thanks xikay. I’m glad you think so.

Tee Akindele wrote a new blog post: Poem: The red eyes of Lagos 2 years ago

I’m the rough voiced civil servant Collecting my wages on the street The public utility Landlord Keeping the peace and collecting rent I’m the government of roughnecks Enforcing law and order underneath the grassroots I’m an eccentric citizen, so what? Make no mistake, I know my rights! In my doped frenzy, I may have the semblance of [...]

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post God-Friend 2 years, 4 months ago

Thanks for reading Raymond, I’m glad you think so

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post God-Friend 2 years, 4 months ago

@scopeman, no worries bro, I just had to ask, I couldn’t be too sure

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post God-Friend 2 years, 4 months ago

Thanks a great deal Estrella and I see the point in your suggestion clearly, modifying that line indeed removes the ambiguity.

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post God-Friend 2 years, 4 months ago

I don’t know how you mean scopeman, I wish you explained more about neatly arranging the lines.

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post THE CRIPPLE AND THE CAR 2 years, 4 months ago

my guy, this is very brilliant work, and I’m all for the ‘wreck’ retitling. Keep this up man!

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post YOU NEVER KNOW (3) 2 years, 4 months ago

Bro, I salute your genius command of words, yet in my opinion, your witty usage of figurative expressions may come out more delicious to a wider range of readers with some moderation. Moderation, perhaps also, in the use of difficult words. I guess this may make it easier to maintain a more uniform density and [...]

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Unrequited Love 2 years, 4 months ago

@Yinka, this is a nice poem, don’t you doubt it. Am I interpreting this line “The Beautiful yet lonely Earth yearns for her Lover” correctly, if I say that the suffering persona is a former lover that is now dead, whose ghost is not letting go of the man? Anyway, there’s a small typo on [...]

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post On Infatuation and heart break 2 years, 4 months ago

Powerful poetry. But ehm, I wish I could preach to the guy to watch out for another chance at love, if he’d learn to take it slow, but the good poetry overwhelmes me!

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Liquid Blue- Part I 2 years, 4 months ago

Really fluid writing like annaBella said and interesting opening to the story, keep this up man!

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post God-Friend 2 years, 4 months ago

Glad you think so too Jaywriter, Thanks again.

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post God-Friend 2 years, 4 months ago

Very well said bro, very well said!

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post God-Friend 2 years, 4 months ago

Yes O Lade, no truer friend!

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Pop in the night breeze 2 years, 4 months ago

Love in the air… right! Glad you like the poem bro

Tee Akindele commented on the blog post Owambe and the city 2 years, 4 months ago

LOL Jaywriter, Thanks very much for the compliments anyway.