sylvia commented on the post, Marrying A Foreign Husband – Episode 1 3 weeks, 6 days ago
I don’t think this story is nice….
It can be made nice. Work on ur sentences, punctuations etc….follow the advice given.
Keep improving your art!
sylvia commented on the post, Mum I Told You 4 weeks ago
I know of a secondary school teacher who abuses the kids bt the management has refused take action against him.
These kids should be educated early enough and taught how to protect themselves and to speak out […]
sylvia commented on the post, On Dark Sister Street 4 weeks ago
I like this poem, very much
sylvia commented on the post, The Grasshopper and the Dove 4 weeks ago
moral lesson: do not be boastful
sylvia commented on the post, Ordinary Dreams 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@bunmiril , I guess the typo has fast legs too.
@Chime221 you have a point, twud b nice if ppl are specific while making observations or corrections.
Thanks for liking the story anyway.
sylvia commented on the post, Ordinary Dreams 1 month ago
A fine way To use those legs, I agree.
The MC was so sure about her return because their father was late, she should attend his funeral…..I tried to show this bt maybe I should have tried harder.
Thaks for pointing that out. Maybe I should have put it in a better way.
@Nalongo yeah it is sad, how’s the telling of the story?
Thanks for reading and commenting
sylvia wrote a new post, Ordinary Dreams 1 month ago
She was always running.
When she was little father bought her a pair of shoes with wheels. They kept her on the move all the time. On one occasion we were on our way back home from school when she hit […]
gabbleTalker commented on the post, Just A Jar 1 month ago
Really good theme. We are nothing, God is everything.
However, I think this needs more work to make a great poem
We never quit learning. Weldone
gabbleTalker commented on the post, Hero’s Eyes 1 month ago
No be small crush o.
Thank you, would look into it @hymar
Thanks for pointing those Out.
gabbleTalker wrote a new post, Hero’s Eyes 1 month, 1 week ago
Thoughts of you cloud my mind
I just want to say how beautiful you are
If I were an artiste I did paint your eyes
They remind me of sunshine
Golden rays that pierce through […]
gabbleTalker commented on the post, Stronger Than Pain 1 month, 1 week ago
My computer demons are to blame about the “I” ish….lol
Not bad at all sir!
gabbleTalker commented on the post, This Wall. These Walls 1 month, 1 week ago
Walls must be torn down.
gabbleTalker commented on the post, Alamu 1 month, 1 week ago
Keep improving ur art. Weldone
gabbleTalker commented on the post, Imagine 1 month, 1 week ago
Nice poem….even lovely