Oh myy!! It read like you had a writing marathon where you wrote for 5 minutes, stopped, and picked up the race again. I loved, loved, loved, the pictures you added. It flowed well like a beautiful piece of […]
The title is extremely lazy for a piece like what you have here.
After the first paragraph my reaction was “ghen, ghen.” This story was hot, sexy, and everything else in between and I enjoyed it fully!
Sima, this is the only work by you that I’ve read and wow! You gave nothing away free without a charge, the price of carefully thinking about those 2 ending lines to each stanzas. You’re really good with word play Sima.