There’s a tickling sensation on the back of my neck as I come to consciousness. It’s a floor ant, making its way up to my head. I sweep at it with the backside of my fingers and roll over. I linger a bit more on […]
Hello, Mr. Uko Bendi Udo @howyoudey. I remember seeing in your profile that you write here, and hoped we’d meet sometime soon. Thanks for your kind words and advice. Too bad about the “eviction”. Hoping to see […]
Hey @sarah. POV = Point Of View. I started with a Third Person Omniscient, telling the story from the girl’s perspective, then the pastor’s, but in a detached way. Then I switched to a 2nd Person Present, from the […]
Thanks all, for your comments: @innoalifa, @bunmiril, @mcsnol, @basseyperfecta. I’ll take your comments to heart.
If you loved this story, then you’ll love my African Fantasy story, “Unabii” for Round Two of […]
Hey, @basseyperfecta. Thanks for your comments. The story had POV switches between scenes, from third person to 2nd person. I guess the cut into two by NaijaStories made it seem a bit disjointed, but I promise you […]
@innoalifa Thanks for noticing. However, “Them” is used as a noun here, “Them” being the name the girl uses to refer to the voices. So, not really, it’s not “they”. Notice its capitalized first letter.
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You have experienced pain in your life, but you have never experienced one like this. That level of pain where there is no tactual sensation, no hurt. Instead you become drained, deranged, only half-aware of […]
Thanks, all, for the comments. The 2nd episode will be available on Thursday 2014-03-20 as from 02:22:14. You can watch out for it. @innoalifa I intended a ‘he’ actually. It was the Pastor who was grateful for […]
The girl’s train of thought returned to the Pastor. She glared at him, contempt forming a fiery ball in her chest. This devil, the reason for my discomfort. She thought of all the things she could do to him. Stab […]
Vally panted and pushed his back further into the wooden walls of the stall. He examined his exposed left foot, now bruised and grubby with black matter. He let some tears fall from his eyes as he whimpered […]