Beautiful stuff loverboy. Would make any lady melt.

Very good stuff. I felt the story was celebrating his talent but the title creates the impresion that it celebrates the love of his girlfriend. I loved the quiet insinuation of a biafra and republic of nigerdelta into the story and mite have taken exception to it but 4d half fiction part. Good job

Nice one. It’s going to get better, am sure. For now though the social media/citizen journalists crew seem to be a minority elite. The almajiris and goons who would be used and manipulated by selfish politicians have no respect for the new media.

true.

oh brilliant brilliant stuff. very impressive. of course you aint him and for that we are grateful.

Really enjoyed this story. And at the risk of repetition,the liquid timber caught me immediately as well. But i wondered how on earth timber became liquid.hmmn. The ladies seem to know,i still dont oh.
Nice one

Maybe am not the poetic guy,but i didnt totally undastand the poem. So as raymond said,cool, but my undastandn was limited.

hmmm…that means she never really got to know why he broke up with her.awww. But a good comeback though. It read like a selfhelp bk 4 ladies with heartbreak at some pts.lol. Beautiful story

Nice one,ray.

Nice story @focus. Keep up the good work. The only observation i have is that the story lacked a strong climax. Kudos

not just dat.i felt it was begnin to be a bit predictable till dat last part.i felt he gave in too easily to d deal despite d powerful dream.

That last paragraph saved the story. Well done