Not bad.

The poems are quite good.@xikay, @sueddie, have a look.

600 level? How many years is…let me shut up.

I sincerlely hope the book hasn’t been published. The book reads like it was written by a very prcocious teenager . It lacks the quality and beauty good books have. The sentences are too simple and straight […]

@TolaO. True talk.
But the world has gone digital anyway, physical libraries now have to make changes to suit the new trend. I just wonder if there could be a way people can borrow a book from the library without […]

I just dey, nwanne. You do ur short stories, really well.I still remember that one about a guy who was checking out a lady that turned out to be his wife. Commitment-phobe for writing ke? Marriage nko?

Hmmm the chaser and the chased go hand in hand like money and sex.

I’ll be honest.
The nicest thing in the piece is the dedication of the poem…
There are 26 lines in this poem and 9 of them contain misspellings and tense errors. The idea of the poem is cool but the […]

This didn’t bore me at all. And that’s a very good thing.
Well done, Henry. $ß

Using the youtube to create interest in your book is a very interesting concept..
I think better things are yet to unfold with the story, for now, chapter 1 is okay…it seems a little bit unreal in some places. […]

Ayo, I have been brainstorming a story idea with somnabulism as the theme. You delivered yours very well. It was good to read..

Just revisit and add more flesh to the parts that feel rushed.
I like the […]

@TolaO
Thanks for your comment. Its been a while.
You will be surprised that even those around Ikoyi do not take advantage of the free library.
But there are lots for book lovers to read from the online […]

One thing this story has going for it is the reaction Zel’s actions create in a reader which is anger; no one loves a cheating, wife beater.

This part leaned heavily on telling…try to show more in subsequent […]

Obinwanne, long time o.
It’s really funny how parents misjudge their own children at times.

This story reads very real, any other ‘swag’ would be contrived…
And I am with @afronuts on its continuity […]

Wow! Shadow chronicles huh? Wonder what the evil man did to his shadow. Since this is part3, where is 1 and 2?
You do the horror thing really well.
Well done, Ray. $ß.

This is a very interesting story.
Fadehan said it like I would have, editing would help make it shine.
Well done. $ß.

I like it… Next please…
Well done. $ß.

He is expired all right. But wait o! This old men that chase girls and get chased by girls, their expiry date never reach? Nice story. Still love ‘Speak softly’ most.

Get new glasses soon, K?
Well done. $ß.

@laworemike ‘s observation mirrors mine… Grief could have been better painted.

I do not want this friend to go… May he stay still longer.
Well done. $ß.

This is really nice. I like the message therein, let’s live and in living we love. No be to talk say U go catch grenade for pesin.

I could feel the words even as I read silently, but I do feel that some lines […]

Do not rush into the big ones yet, just strengthen your abilities on the short stories, then you can begin to journey into novellas and all.
And the stopping thingy happens to even the best…you are not alone. […]

Niyi, what are U saying? Whether your muse abandon you abi na U sack am, that one no concern us, just do finish the story jare.

Getting it published here doesn’t mean editing ends, so revisit it from time and […]

Thanks xikay, this is helpful. Well done. $ß.

@xikay. I did put a…cutline O, I don’t know who stole it.
And I forgot the cameraman was you. But do you credit the photogragher even when the camera isn’t his?
The fotos are many. I don’t know when I can […]

@francis…I don’t know why you like to insult me! How dare you say that I look gentle? What kinda talk is that?? See…

What pictures? @sueddie. I sent some to facebook. You can save them from there.
Ok, I will send some later to your email or wherever. So the book launch was great? Awesome.