Am totally with you on this, @febidel. How many of us are truly free of the kind of ignorance Shem exhibited. I wonder how many of the man’s mockers even knew the full meaning of NSCDC before this whole thing.

Grand.

Your story is so touching and flows so well that one tends to overlook all the flaws. Wonder if you wrote this on your phone, but even at that, you should be careful with your writing.

Really like the story. Good job.

There’s a good story in there, but it could be written better.

Got me laughing all through this. Nice one.
Used to ask myself the same questions too, but in time I found out it’s actually pretty cool being a woman, lots of perks to it.

Madam Sunbo watched with critical eyes as her customer’s hands adroitly probed at the mass of flesh before him. The frown on her face would have hurried his decision, if he wasn’t too engrossed in his examination […]

Interesting and well-written.

Wow. Congrats to the winners.

The POV switch did confuse me, especially as the 2nd person was used in both cases, and am not sure whether or not that’s a good thing.
Its an interesting way to write sha.

Hope to see the complete story soon then.

Are these things what all men want or what YOU want?

Really nice piece and well-written too, but I think articles like this ought to be based on facts and not just an individual’s perception. Like carrying out […]

@elly…thanks a bunch. Glad you enjoyed it.

@Sparkle, thanks.

Am glad. Thanks @psalmy.

Thanks for reading and liking the story @hon3ydr0p5

Wow

Thanks a bunch @febidel.

Interesting story.

I found it too preachy to enjoy. Also you told too much instead of showing in a bid to mold your reader’s view. You should have just shown and let us form our opinion, makes it more interesting.
Still though, I […]

Its a touching story, but could have been written better. With a little polishing this could have really shone.
Still, its a nice story. Good job.

What a birthday gift. Grand piece.

Hmmm…I really like this. Well-written and imaginative piece.

Lol

Aesthetic writing; unforgettable lines. But d story itself is so vague, and the character unconvincing…
Still, it made good reading.

The only thing I like about this is the French title.

I like the story, this is something so common in our society today.
But like someone said, it ended too abruptly. We didn’t get the chance to feel d girl’s plight, to b touched. I know there’s word count and […]

The first line caught my interest and it was held to the end. Feel like something was missing, though.

In all, a great piece. Good job.

Good one. Seeing things from a killer’s angle is always interesting, though this one dragged a bit in the middle.

Very well told…a bit ambiguous in the beginning, but flowed so well afterwards.