Dont get it

Well either she poisons her father or the disgusting old man…simple

Crazy

Maybe you should give it to somebody proof read for ya..

This was way better…i pity the woman….

**Barely make ends meet..**
*he made for me***
Some few mistakes…

This was nice….keep it up…

What a heartless jerk

Hahaha na as e dey do me for body jare..ppl cant keep getting away wiyh rape…its not cool

Too much wahala

Hell no…i dont care who he saw..that guy should be locked up and the key thrown in the pacific ocean…

Interesting….spice it up

May my God npt fail to help me punish that Bode of a bastard..and karma bite Dunni in the azz..

Kinda saw this pregnancy coming sha..knew it was gonna get messier..poor girl

All this grammer for nothing…this was hard to read..story was everywhere..
Score: F9

C for effort sha

I swear i dont know wht this was about….maybe i should read again

Only two days???na wa

Kaycee has pointed it all out..nothing to,add..

B for effort

Big azz smile cemented on mi face….thot that gun was real…welll lucky him….me dont give second chances….hope him go use am well…as for that stupid angela gurl once a whore always a whore…once the side […]

Just one message and he is already shaken…agbaya…..

Rum pa pa pam
Rum pa pa pam
Rum pa pa pam
Man down…
song dat came into my mind after reading the last line
These are the kinda punishment cheating azz bastard men deserve

Come whts all this naw??why is it getting shorter and shorter and shorter??u wan take the rest cook soup abi??fix it jor…*vexmode*