This is a great emotional and revolutionary piece that fits this era of rapes and abuse

Sire, it is a fun dragging a bit with you. Telling and showing. I surrender. I am happy here. You know I’m new here, but it’s great with us. Tips, great tips to make better writers. Thank you too.

You know you are trying to help, but some might get it wrong andfell ‘oh, he call some works fragment’, all the same, I love you Zeal, but much more, objectivity

Friend, let it be a friendly discuss. What I mean is rather than say you are angry at some people’s work or condemn the works, you can correct errors, suggests better tips as you have done but in a less or no […]

In short, you are a quotable scholar in the field of literature. What will you do to ‘On First Looking Into Chapman’s Homer’? The fact remains that you just need to know the type of poetry you are writing: […]

Well, first of all, Nigeria is a state or a country and never a nation but under or within it are nations and tribe. An heterogenious state is never a nation except differences are solved. Now i must commend, that […]

Well done. I start with the form. Free verse makes it more emotional and it fits the poem as a lyrical poem of a curious and unsettled mind. The themes there as i think anyway are:
anxiety, maturity, necessities, […]

It was a title that may be fitting if it is viewed from the shift from frustration to fatealism. Mimetically,
out of desperation
we want to join corruption
and out of frustration
we resort to bb, sports, […]

I appreciate your comment and love your reaction. Thank you very much. I wish to say that the day i posted it, it was as a poem. I did not even know that it was scartered. And since that day, i couldn’t log in. I am sorry.