Yes, I did read it a third time. Fine protest poetry it is. And it is to be spoken, for what it’s worth. Good job.

Overspiced with angst. It will make for a more appealing poetry if the rather harsh diction is toned with metaphors. It works for a spoken word, but for poetry, I will not read it twice.

Nice one. I’m sure it’s going to worth participating. Poetry isn’t dying afteral. Thanks for the reassurance.