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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, Love in the Bar 9 3 years, 9 months ago
I look to see the next one then.
nice buildup though, only that you cut the whole trip short, like you use the KISS law there. -
Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, When Dogs bark [A Dairy of an ailurophile] 3 years, 9 months ago
I like your style and composition.
you helped my boring afternoon. -
Sunshine and
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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, O Africa, Now We are here. 5 years, 8 months ago
thanks thanks thanks.
Tola, you really took time to do this correction.
like a teacher that needs his students progress.
though am not your responsibility but you spent your time doing this corrections.
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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, Nelson Rohlihlahla Mandela 5 years, 11 months ago
Nice piece you put together. Well said.
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Ronald Bellaz wrote a new post, The Curse. 5 years, 11 months ago
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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, O Africa, Now We are here. 5 years, 11 months ago
Sure i just figured that mistake now, ”is” omitted was and i wrote while in place of why ”that while” thank i gat that covered.
Line four- Ate flesh of raw beast, do you suppose it to be what?
Thanks for […]
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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, O Africa, Now We are here. 5 years, 11 months ago
Tanks, and i took your correction.
I fink maybe the Coherence lies in the last line or every stanza.May be if you check you would see it. Anyways tanks for your time
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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, O Africa, Now We are here. 5 years, 11 months ago
Tanks bro, for both your time, Prayer and advise.
But i would have loved to know your take on the poem. How bad is it
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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, O Africa, Now We are here. 5 years, 11 months ago
Thanks Bro, but i would prefer if you point correction, just little if you have less time to go fully into it.
Thanks for your comment. I would really appreciate direct correction.
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Ronald Bellaz wrote a new post, O Africa, Now We are here. 6 years ago
This piece is Ronalds first work on N.S, I know it not a perfect work that while I posted it For your constructive critism. Thanks For your endulgence.
Now We are here.
We matched from the medival […]
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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, Go, find yourself 6 years ago
like For For real bro this is great. For real the message is driven home straight.
Good one I say. really good.
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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, Be A Man 6 years ago
Good one, drawing a picture, conveying the perfect image, drawn with pure words.
I like your chose of words used.
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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, Earth rising and Medi 6 years ago
Woooooow this is a very cute work of act.
Like you took me along in every passing seconds I spent reading this poem.
Nice words about mother nature.
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Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, A.K.A Cancer 6 years ago
Short of word, course i might be more worst than you.
No critics at all. -
Ronald Bellaz commented on the post, Caro 6 years ago
Caro dey fire pass ferarri, can u keep up. Caro dey do she no dey tire, go drink ogidiga.
Or else u no go c her breaklight.Very cool piece. It had me indulged at every passing second.
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