flash… but obviously not funny. I like the style you employed.
well done

A good beginning this is

@chetty seriously?? You don’t get to say ‘this is not poetry’ … not ever. Unlike other genres, poetry isn’t defined by annoying must-dos and must-nots, it’s could be catharsis… it could be music… it could be […]

Actually @sarahchristy21 , there isn’t anything really suspenseful in this, the title of the story already gave it out. -the only complaint have got about the story

Beautifully crafted. I love this.

Lol. . . the last one made my day! There’s truth to the first quote too.
Well done.

Good story… nice message. Too many needless ellipses spoilt the flow at some point though. All the same, this is good.

Well done.

Thank you @levuz . Don’t worry, a praise from Levuz is worth a thousand. It’s good to hear from you again, it’s been a while I came on NS.

Merci beaucoup.

Been away from this series for a long time. . .you still haven’t lost your touch, Ibukun.

Well done.

Nice. . .not as funny as other Ness series I’ve read though.
All the same, well done.

I love the penultimate verse, my fav it is.

Good job.

Probably the best court-related piece I’ve read on NS.
Well done.

Nice one. Your tenses did conflict in some parts of the poem though. Why do I get the feeling it might be intentional? They were ‘consistently conflicting’

Good job.

A good start it is…
Been a long while @namdi

Well done…

My pick of all the episodes…I see the budding romance now…I like the way you write ‘ conversations’ , you make them really realistic. Looking forward to the next…
Well done