Dimeji

Dimeji

  • Dimeji posted an update 5 years, 11 months ago

    How do I publush on this forum?
    I alway face chalenges trying to do that.
    Thank you @somebody for belping

  • I like it. It spoke to my heart, as well told my mind.

    Keep it up.

  • Dimeji commented on the post, The Fight 5 years, 11 months ago

    The initial “I punched him in the kidney” would have put me off. But thank God I chose to read through. Short, powerful DEEP. It’s worth my time.

    Good job.

  • More than helpful. I feel you.

  • Dimeji commented on the post, Sin 5 years, 11 months ago

    Wow! I mean, who’got that descriptive power?
    Up to the last word, the story is one thing- stunning.
    I have a problem with some expressions thoughe e.g “manicured toes”, “swell of cleavage”…

  • Dimeji commented on the post, Olaedo 5 years, 11 months ago

    Nice piece.
    Apparently, gold is your symbol of beauty.
    You could have made do with just imagery if you just cut the shes and hers.

  • Nice is all.
    You wrote that “stress” lines were visible on your face. I think those should be “tension” lines, and I don’t think you can see them on your own face except you look through the mirror…

  • Dimeji commented on the post, Silence 6 years ago

    Deep. I have to admit that.
    I like the way you built up your thought into something really tight.

    Nice piece you got there. keep writing.

  • Dimeji commented on the post, Outcast – Episode 10 6 years ago

    This episode is especially captivating.
    I can’t wait to read the rest of the story. However the following phrase: “Aunty Patience tomatoes seller’s customer shade.” doesn’t seem to agree with the narrator’s […]

  • Dimeji commented on the post, Outcast – Episode 9 6 years ago

    Nice piece up here.
    I didn’t quite get the “When my father suddenly took ill and died two years ago, the family asked my mom to take me into custody…” part of the story.
    When did Aunty patience have the other […]

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