@Chime221. I thank you for sharing your thoughts on the poem with me.
However, what I don’t understand is what you meant when you said that my last line seemed to have a “forced end line rhyming”. To be frank […]
Sharing the same heart of love
With the almighty God above,
They could see through each other’s eyes
The fire of desire touching the skies
But isn’t any daring enough to break the ice?
For they love each […]