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good read

beautiful. not in lagos though.

See how some people look for wahala. Okay now.

Been away for a while but I see you are doing great with your writing. Like that you want to do something different with this.

beautiful twist. Twist in the tale ending is not my turf so I hail pple who do it successfully. gisike

me sef confuse whether na the same story wey I read na im he read

Well written although it was predictable.
How come her father was promising her a phone 30 years ago? I presume you meant a mobile phone and the setting was not futuristic.
Welcome

What a choice of payback. Only one thing will follow- more beating. And as @mimiadebayo pointed out this is a bad timing for payback of that type-she is pregnant.
Anyway waiting to see how far with her payback.
well done.

For wetin, my sis write o. Nobody else will tell the stories you want to tell the way you want to tell it. We all get better by writing, writing, writing and of course reading, reading, reading.
@Bibbie thanks […]

Beautiful piece. well written.
very often we let one bad moment rob us of many good ones. totally dig this.

I got to the etisalat page when someone canvassed for vote but when I read the story I thought to myself this story should not win. So I decided to read other stories. Those I read were nothing to talk about. I […]

Better late than never happy birthday @mimiadebayo. Hope you will write the occasional short story for those of us who can’t keep up with series.

I love what you did with this piece.
Its amazing how if you give your story enough time to brew it comes out better because your first idea is not always the best.
Also liked how you acknowledged the appropriate […]

Wish you had done much with this theme. It is a great one. Liked the idea

@sibbylwhyte no be small fake accents and all

Well written (tense, pov , sentence structure). Kudos
However the resolution of the conflict is hurried. It is a flash so one can understand the paucity of character and setting development but the hurried nature […]

Yippee! our very own shortlisted.

Wetin we go do dis rat now. Otapiapia suppose get am now. U fit still try rat gum but the rat fit do jump and pass.
Packing out no be option o as rat follow u from warri reach lagos e go follow u go […]

Beautiful piece Enoquin. so looking forward to the next part.
I hardly ever read series but this is beautiful and I am sure to follow

Thanks @TolaO. Nobody is ever all bad or all good. I’m glad I captured that