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osakwe commented on the post, Clara’s Transition 5 years ago
Tenses switched erratically and it made a story with such interesting characters lose its luster. The rendition of a story is really very important. you should work on it
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osakwe commented on the post, Americanah Ko, Britico Ni 5 years, 1 month ago
And you know what, that was what Adichie was going for, a not too likeable character that was memorable and she totally nailed it
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osakwe commented on the post, Americanah Ko, Britico Ni 5 years, 1 month ago
Not unhappy as in moping around sad. Did you think she was a happy person while reading the novel? A critical thinker yeah, a smart woman sure, an eye for details and the little nuances society ignores definitely, […]
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osakwe commented on the post, Americanah Ko, Britico Ni 5 years, 1 month ago
Enjoyed reading that book.
While I liked Ifemelu’s strength and quick eye I thought her a very judgemental person( and an unhappy one) who hardly ever had anything good to say about anyone. My thoughts after […] -
osakwe commented on the post, Meeting Kamara 5 years, 1 month ago
@Levus you are very funny.
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osakwe commented on the post, Meeting the Family 5 years, 1 month ago
Bola needs to watch her back.
“A colonial style large villa, Bola’s immediate thoughts were of a colonial style large villa that rose from the hills with cream walls and stone washed pillars”
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osakwe commented on the post, The Beauty of the Con 5 years, 1 month ago
@innoalifa, thanks for reading my old posts. Glad you enjoyed reading them.
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osakwe commented on the post, The Wrong Bag 5 years, 3 months ago
interesting read.
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osakwe commented on the post, “Hello? I’M PREGNANT!!” 5 years, 4 months ago
being pregnant is just a first part to the success of ivf, the next part is its staying well past the first trimester
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osakwe commented on the post, Dinner for Three 5 years, 5 months ago
lovely piece, wonderful writing.
only prob is that the guy obviously loves his wife and such a guy will not leave his pregnant wife alone all night long. When it comes to worrying about preg, labour and delivery […] -
osakwe commented on the post, Unrepentant 5 years, 8 months ago
Ha! Okay o.
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osakwe commented on the post, The First Kiss 5 years, 8 months ago
Eiya a grandson’s first kiss. Raised Mama Ikotun too. E no easy.
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osakwe commented on the post, Mahoganies and Phones 5 years, 8 months ago
eiya.
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osakwe commented on the post, Naija Stories Needs YOU! Calling all Members in Lagos and Nearby! 5 years, 8 months ago
beautiful. not in lagos though.
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osakwe commented on the post, I Go Go(3) 5 years, 9 months ago
See how some people look for wahala. Okay now.
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osakwe commented on the post, I Go Go – Payback Time 2 5 years, 9 months ago
Been away for a while but I see you are doing great with your writing. Like that you want to do something different with this.
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osakwe commented on the post, Skin To Skin 5 years, 9 months ago
beautiful twist. Twist in the tale ending is not my turf so I hail pple who do it successfully. gisike
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osakwe commented on the post, Skin To Skin 5 years, 9 months ago
me sef confuse whether na the same story wey I read na im he read
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osakwe commented on the post, Diana”s Diary 5 years, 10 months ago
Well written although it was predictable.
How come her father was promising her a phone 30 years ago? I presume you meant a mobile phone and the setting was not futuristic.
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osakwe commented on the post, I Go Go – It’s Payback Time 5 years, 10 months ago
What a choice of payback. Only one thing will follow- more beating. And as @mimiadebayo pointed out this is a bad timing for payback of that type-she is pregnant.
Anyway waiting to see how far with her payback.
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