Tenses switched erratically and it made a story with such interesting characters lose its luster. The rendition of a story is really very important. you should work on it

And you know what, that was what Adichie was going for, a not too likeable character that was memorable and she totally nailed it

Not unhappy as in moping around sad. Did you think she was a happy person while reading the novel? A critical thinker yeah, a smart woman sure, an eye for details and the little nuances society ignores definitely, […]

Enjoyed reading that book.
While I liked Ifemelu’s strength and quick eye I thought her a very judgemental person( and an unhappy one) who hardly ever had anything good to say about anyone. My thoughts after […]

@Levus you are very funny.
Thanks for taking the time to read it

Bola needs to watch her back.

“A colonial style large villa, Bola’s immediate thoughts were of a colonial style large villa that rose from the hills with cream walls and stone washed pillars”
The first phrase […]

@innoalifa, thanks for reading my old posts. Glad you enjoyed reading them.
Definitely miss having time to write and spend time on the site

interesting read.
wish you didn’t put that last line. it was not necessary

being pregnant is just a first part to the success of ivf, the next part is its staying well past the first trimester
Great plot, good story but the transitions were poorly done

lovely piece, wonderful writing.
only prob is that the guy obviously loves his wife and such a guy will not leave his pregnant wife alone all night long. When it comes to worrying about preg, labour and delivery […]

Ha! Okay o.

Eiya a grandson’s first kiss. Raised Mama Ikotun too. E no easy.

eiya.
good read

beautiful. not in lagos though.

See how some people look for wahala. Okay now.

Been away for a while but I see you are doing great with your writing. Like that you want to do something different with this.

beautiful twist. Twist in the tale ending is not my turf so I hail pple who do it successfully. gisike

me sef confuse whether na the same story wey I read na im he read

Well written although it was predictable.
How come her father was promising her a phone 30 years ago? I presume you meant a mobile phone and the setting was not futuristic.
Welcome

What a choice of payback. Only one thing will follow- more beating. And as @mimiadebayo pointed out this is a bad timing for payback of that type-she is pregnant.
Anyway waiting to see how far with her payback.
well done.