I appreciate good writing and yours is an excellent piece. A little slice of heaven.

I’ll go stalk you now.

We all make mistakes in our writing(me sef follow) but there are quite a lot in this piece.

I understand that everyone here is trying their best and that no one is perfect, but that’s no excuse. Millions of […]

Thank you for this @folakemiemem-akpan. It is pretty rare to hear someone talk about the “after” part of the wedding. Everyone focuses on the glitz and glam of the wedding day and forgets the most important part […]

Hi @anakadrian,

First, I apologize for taking this long to reply. I had exams but that’s gone now. Well, I was just laughing as I read your comment. I appreciate that you liked the story and went through it. I […]

Thank you very much @dees-hive, I do appreciate the comment. At least, now, I am more motivated to write carefully on NS knowing that people still look out for proper editing in a story/write-up.

I appreciate […]

@folakemiemem-akpan, lol. I guess so. Or having nothing to say or do for the country but still wanting to get elected into power.

Thank you, Ugochukwu, for this.

I think the decline of good stories or improvements in stories is due to the lack of positive critiques (or sometimes just normal critiques which might come across as biting). Everybody wants to be the person […]

Hey @anastasia, I was referring to where you told her to link two sentences. A lot of her sentences run like that. I also thought I might add a bit about why she might have done that.

On the “complicated […]

Yayyyyy!. I normally yawn when i read poems or rhymes but I really like this.

I do not get this line though.

“He pouts as if seasoning”.

Could you explain? I do not have on my extraordinary thinking cap today.

@Anastasia, I do not mean to be the Grand Defender of Madam @folakemiemem-akpan, but me thinks, she writes her sentences that way (short, broken) based on a certain writing style. It allows for an easy read. I […]

This, this comment right here by @ufuomaotebele, says it all.

Continue. Use her corrections. I have no idea if there is a second part yet, but I shall look now.

It is a good story.

Great story! Kinda out of the box.

Kinda.

You should continue.

@Amarachi , I feel exactly the same way. Posting on open writing sites should be done with the aim of getting genuine feedback, comments telling me what to do better. Not ones, like “This character sha suffered […]

@anakadrian , my view exactly. You hit the nail on the head.

CHOI! @himalone, I am trying to act and sound grown up here but you just gave me the encouragement of life. Nna, it is to go and buy isi ewu and Pami on top this comment. One love!

Yeah, we should exchange ideas @newnaija. Twitter it is…

@newnaija, I totally agree with you. We seem to have forgotten that culture and strength lies in Tradition, lore, language and art. That is also why Africa is falling behind; we push away the old and run into the […]