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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, All the little things 4 years, 11 months ago
I appreciate good writing and yours is an excellent piece. A little slice of heaven.
I’ll go stalk you now.
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, If I Could Only See The Future 4 years, 11 months ago
We all make mistakes in our writing(me sef follow) but there are quite a lot in this piece.
I understand that everyone here is trying their best and that no one is perfect, but that’s no excuse. Millions of […]
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, These gray hairs do not lie II 5 years, 7 months ago
Thank you for this @folakemiemem-akpan. It is pretty rare to hear someone talk about the “after” part of the wedding. Everyone focuses on the glitz and glam of the wedding day and forgets the most important part […]
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Mazi. Erikposi and
Onu-Okpara Chiamaka are now friends 5 years, 10 months ago
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, Tightening the Noose 5 years, 11 months ago
Hi @anakadrian,
First, I apologize for taking this long to reply. I had exams but that’s gone now. Well, I was just laughing as I read your comment. I appreciate that you liked the story and went through it. I […]
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, Tightening the Noose 5 years, 11 months ago
Thank you very much @dees-hive, I do appreciate the comment. At least, now, I am more motivated to write carefully on NS knowing that people still look out for proper editing in a story/write-up.
I appreciate […]
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, Tightening the Noose 5 years, 11 months ago
@folakemiemem-akpan, lol. I guess so. Or having nothing to say or do for the country but still wanting to get elected into power.
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, The Quill – The Art of Writing 5 years, 11 months ago
Thank you, Ugochukwu, for this.
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, Memo To All – Naijastories How Far??!! 5 years, 11 months ago
I think the decline of good stories or improvements in stories is due to the lack of positive critiques (or sometimes just normal critiques which might come across as biting). Everybody wants to be the person […]
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, The Grandest Place 5 years, 11 months ago
Hey @anastasia, I was referring to where you told her to link two sentences. A lot of her sentences run like that. I also thought I might add a bit about why she might have done that.
On the “complicated […]
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka wrote a new post, Tightening the Noose 5 years, 11 months ago
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, Lost by Lust 5 years, 11 months ago
Yayyyyy!. I normally yawn when i read poems or rhymes but I really like this.
I do not get this line though.
“He pouts as if seasoning”.
Could you explain? I do not have on my extraordinary thinking cap today.
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, The Grandest Place 5 years, 11 months ago
@Anastasia, I do not mean to be the Grand Defender of Madam @folakemiemem-akpan, but me thinks, she writes her sentences that way (short, broken) based on a certain writing style. It allows for an easy read. I […]
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, The Chattering Roads 5 years, 11 months ago
This, this comment right here by @ufuomaotebele, says it all.
Continue. Use her corrections. I have no idea if there is a second part yet, but I shall look now.
It is a good story.
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, The Long Night: Frog Stew 5 years, 11 months ago
Great story! Kinda out of the box.
Kinda.
You should continue.
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, Last Stand 5 years, 11 months ago
@Amarachi , I feel exactly the same way. Posting on open writing sites should be done with the aim of getting genuine feedback, comments telling me what to do better. Not ones, like “This character sha suffered […]
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, Last Stand 5 years, 11 months ago
@anakadrian , my view exactly. You hit the nail on the head.
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, Drum Beats 6 years ago
CHOI! @himalone, I am trying to act and sound grown up here but you just gave me the encouragement of life. Nna, it is to go and buy isi ewu and Pami on top this comment. One love!
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, Drum Beats 6 years ago
Yeah, we should exchange ideas @newnaija. Twitter it is…
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Onu-Okpara Chiamaka commented on the post, Drum Beats 6 years ago
@newnaija, I totally agree with you. We seem to have forgotten that culture and strength lies in Tradition, lore, language and art. That is also why Africa is falling behind; we push away the old and run into the […]
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