Wow.. The repetition of her living with a boy made me bored for a moment, but as soon as you broke the ice…….wow

True tho but thanks still @namdi

Thanks @ojestar

Bloody mosquito’s thank God they have not bee able to the life of any of my loved ones. And the female mosquito don’t feed on blood they use to noirish their young. Well done.

Holy Fried Plantain and Gizzard…….I have totally been in his shoes…well done bro

love it and its a pretty long letter

i think this was funny and nice and a pretty long letter

a lovely write up well done but in the third paragraph “Fighting pimples is like fighting war” sounded wrong.”Fighting pimples is like fighting endless battles of war” would have been better but well done again

@thaprince i wasnt exactly saying i was reading a boxing fight I felt like it and thats all thanks to your knowledge of boxing terms and my imagination because i pictured in my head the things being personified as […]

i kinda really liked it. I tot i was actually reading a boxing fight……..nice work bro

lovely write up. Just that you sounded athiest (not that i am against it, that one is your choice). Well i believe one can have a purpose that will put your mind far above “nature’s hierachical configuration “

hmmmm..nice write up.. Many parents are victims and causes of this happenings although all may not lead to death….. First the boy thought money was more valuable than his sister life because he couldnt trust his […]

nice write up, a lovely one infact, but the use of present tense wasnt totally favouring you as i noticed in the third part

this is a great poem and should be read aloud in every parent’s [esp. Nigerian ] ear