Sad, but very vivid.
You did good with this

Sad, but very vivid.
You did good with this

Preach it, sister!
Married doesn’t mean all that va va voom sexy goes out the door.

I enjoyed this.
Off to read Part 2.

This was intriguing.
Now, I want to know all about the link between the scary old woman and the guava tree.
Good job, Francis.

I really really loved reading this.

I loved this a whole lot

Thanks, @menoveg

Lol!
@menoveg, I see your browser eventually loaded

Thank you, @menoveg
I hope you can still wake up early and alert

I agree with @Seun-Odukoya ‘s analysis of the story. It was well written, but it wasn’t much different from the original story in the Bible. In my opinion, a retelling should reveal stuff we never knew before or […]

Congrats, @Mimiadebayo

@febidel, I tried to picture the female doll squeezing right back and just burst into laughter.
No mind them, jare… Bride price ko, groom price ni.
Life happens, mehn!

@febidel, You have said it all, jare

I’m glad you did, @febidel.
About the conflict ending… Hmmm…. Let’s just say these characters take on lives of their own once they get in my head
They said they were done fighting so, I had to give it a rest, lol.

Thanks a lot, @febidel

Good plan, @febidel
Enjoy

Tell me about it.
Thank you, @febidel

I enjoyed all the parts of the story. You did a great job with them.
I’m looking forward to the next part.

I enjoyed reading this cos it was well written.
His pain at her loss was evident.
I loved the ending even more and smiled with them all

Exactly! You said it yourself, it depends on how intense the feelings were.
My point is that the story has to show a build-up of emotions to the point where she kills William. She may well have been unstable, […]

I like the story, but the telling of it wasn’t very vivid, in my opinion.
There was hardly any showing of events, cos you told most of it.

The ending alluded to drama, alright, but the narrative was sorta […]

I’m glad you do, @HRS
Thank you.

Lol! Abi?

Thanks a lot, @olajumoke
You’re so right, jare… Not every love story needs all of that somewhat contrived drama.
I’m very glad you enjoyed the story.

@Inthequiet, I couldn’t stop till I got to the end, cos I just had to know how her life turned out. Sometimes, life just isn’t fair.
This was an interesting read.

@khadijahmuhammad , I agree with @elovepoetry. […]

Mimi, You know what? I was actually thinking, “All’s well that ends well” while reading, only to get to the end to see that you ended it just that way
I enjoyed the series

Thanks a lot, @francis

Thanks a lot, @elovepoetry

When I saw the title, I thought it was going to be just like the last episode. Sigh of relief, lol!

I have a few observations, though.
1. Your dialogues run into each other. When there’s a conversation going […]