Thanks @okemejames.

@okemejames,lovely write up and nice use of words.

I love poems and I love this one!
This is beautiful @okemejames, thanks for sharing it.

@Vanessa, If I hia! Lol

@Okemejames, I like the picture you used, it was a good concept with the poem.

@OKEMEJAMES. You’ve said it all using the beauty of poetry. Excellent piece. Every time my mind dwells on what 14 Feb 2015 will give us I get scared and sad. I just wish cupid will use his arrow to help us, lets […]

@okemejames, you’re welcome, always naah :)

@okemejames Clap for your self or wait, let me do he clapping for you! This was plain beautiful.
“Tell them I’ve not ordered the killings
Which has resulted to the fleeing.”
“In whose name are we doing the […]

@OKEMEJAMES, well-said!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

@okemejames you’re forever welcome

@okemejames,
you’re most welcome
for poetry in its utmost
depicts life’s realities
in ways full of verities………………..KEEP ON FELLOW……….

@OKEMEJAMES, a really poetic piece here…………but instead of brethren in the first line of the second stanza, you spelled brethen………. that’s an oversight I think……………Good job!

@okemejames, thanks for reading and commenting………………..

@okemejames, that’s fine……………checking them out…………….

@okemejames, I’m eager to consume your subsequent poems…

@okemejames, always welcome………… I commend your creative choice of words…

@okemejames, you’re welcome and I’m hoping to read more from you… :)

@okemejames, There is something brilliant about this poem but I can’t seem to place my finger on what that is exact. Good concept.

@okemejames thanks for reading and the nice comment.

I like the clearly expressed sentiment, @okemejames, but try to make your sentence construction more fluid; for example:

“Never seems to be too much in a hurry

So there is no cause to be worried

Of either […]

Thanks for reading @okemejames