@Benny As @innoalifa mentioned, there were a lot of typos and some grammatical errors. The story itself is fast paced and dramatic but it would be nice to go through your work next time before submitting.
@Lordjosh please, can you tag the next chapters with the tittle of this story just like you did the previous chapters. It would make it a lot easier to find the next chapter.
I’m still loving the flow of the […]