This reminds me of your other work, ‘Night Whisper’, @dboy.

There’s the same ‘moment of decision’ feel about it, but there’s also the same overuse of descriptive sentences which suffocates the story.

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Not good ᵃ†̥̥ cajoling people but this made a great read…
‘But just try Α̲̅πϑ adjust this:
Fifteen guys in a year for a virgin??’
It lacks any element of reality…

Pretty hard †Φ see a virgin date Α̲̅πϑ […]

Simple and straightforward, @uzywhyte.

Scary

Pls dnt tel me dis is d end o. Nice story

For the records: Nigerian English is that English that has been domesticated and nativised to express the Nigerian worldview, experience and culture. Pidgin is just a variety which can grow to become creole. […]

THANK YOU SIR, I DONT KNOW MY WRITING INSTRUMENTS @fadehan!

@newreign, your words are true.
Thanks,,,

Well,she should have told them that she is a virgin so they wouldn’t think she is giving to another what she is withholding from them.

More reason y u shudnt do bad at all, sori sha

@sibbylwhyte ….I should write a dude a poem? That doesn’t seem right…I’m straight oh!

thank u @olajumoke God bless you.

@kaycee, now what exactly is your definition of mumuness? From whence dost it begin to be extracted in this piece?

@topazo thanks! lol, your advice reminds me of movie I saw a while ago!

Ur sentences were lumped together and made the meaning lost in most places. And in trying to paint a picture, u used too many words…
Keep writing

I enjoyed this. As per scrapping, they might as well leave the nysc thing. If I hadn’t done it now, it would have been different. Let all these kids suffer jor

I like.

Pregnancy things….

@strongself Wonderful review.

A few months ago, I was asked by a colleague to recommend books for his long essay and I stumbled on the text. Had to read to give my sincere verdict and I was really impressed. […]

We worry a lot over things that are not in our control… Js put ur hand over ur heart and say “all is well”

Nice poem… I like

Well done

Hmm… Creepy or maybe u Wer Js dreaming and had a terrible dream that made u shit ur pants… Lolz
Nicely written

‎​ℓ☺​ℓ! Thankee plenty!

@sambrightomo, this is absolutely hilarious. I like the use of pidgin, it helps the ‘tori’ flow. Welldone.