Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Destiny 34 minutes ago
This reminds me of your other work, ‘Night Whisper’, @dboy.
There’s the same ‘moment of decision’ feel about it, but there’s also the same overuse of descriptive sentences which suffocates the story.
thandiubani commented on the post, Serial Lover II 52 minutes ago
Not good ᵃ†̥̥ cajoling people but this made a great read…
‘But just try Α̲̅πϑ adjust this:
Fifteen guys in a year for a virgin??’
It lacks any element of reality…
Pretty hard †Φ see a virgin date Α̲̅πϑ […]
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, I Need You 53 minutes ago
Simple and straightforward, @uzywhyte.
Koollove commented on the post, Masquerade Stories (Excerpt) 1 hour, 39 minutes ago
Koollove commented on the post, The Walls Between 1 hour, 58 minutes ago
Pls dnt tel me dis is d end o. Nice story
sambright commented on the post, Fasting Palava 2 hours, 11 minutes ago
For the records: Nigerian English is that English that has been domesticated and nativised to express the Nigerian worldview, experience and culture. Pidgin is just a variety which can grow to become creole. […]
olajumoke omisore and sambright are now friends 2 hours, 27 minutes ago
chemokopi and sambright are now friends 2 hours, 27 minutes ago
sambright commented on the post, Fasting Palava 2 hours, 28 minutes ago
THANK YOU SIR, I DONT KNOW MY WRITING INSTRUMENTS @fadehan!
thandiubani commented on the post, The Scent Of Death: A Poem 2 hours, 51 minutes ago
@newreign, your words are true.
Izuone commented on the post, Serial Lover II 5 hours, 7 minutes ago
Well,she should have told them that she is a virgin so they wouldn’t think she is giving to another what she is withholding from them.
Koollove commented on the post, The Good Deed 5 hours, 38 minutes ago
More reason y u shudnt do bad at all, sori sha
Afronuts commented on the post, Nicole Bassey 6 hours, 56 minutes ago
@sibbylwhyte ….I should write a dude a poem? That doesn’t seem right…I’m straight oh!
sambright commented on the post, Fasting Palava 7 hours, 17 minutes ago
thank u @olajumoke God bless you.
Da Queen and topazo are now friends 7 hours, 35 minutes ago
EXCELLENCY commented on the post, Dear Sam Bright Omo 7 hours, 59 minutes ago
@kaycee, now what exactly is your definition of mumuness? From whence dost it begin to be extracted in this piece?
Mobola commented on the post, Que sera sera and all that 8 hours, 1 minute ago
@topazo thanks! lol, your advice reminds me of movie I saw a while ago!
topazo commented on the post, Saving Egbo 8 hours, 7 minutes ago
Ur sentences were lumped together and made the meaning lost in most places. And in trying to paint a picture, u used too many words…
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Pokahuntass commented on the post, Clarion Call IV 8 hours, 34 minutes ago
I enjoyed this. As per scrapping, they might as well leave the nysc thing. If I hadn’t done it now, it would have been different. Let all these kids suffer jor
Pokahuntass commented on the post, The Clarion Call I 8 hours, 47 minutes ago
topazo commented on the post, As Deep As The Sea 9 8 hours, 55 minutes ago
Rita commented on the post, “Say You’re One of Them” by Uwem Akpan 8 hours, 56 minutes ago
@strongself Wonderful review.
A few months ago, I was asked by a colleague to recommend books for his long essay and I stumbled on the text. Had to read to give my sincere verdict and I was really impressed. […]
topazo commented on the post, Que sera sera and all that 9 hours, 26 minutes ago
We worry a lot over things that are not in our control… Js put ur hand over ur heart and say “all is well”
Nice poem… I like
topazo commented on the post, Up, Dark and Early 9 hours, 32 minutes ago
Hmm… Creepy or maybe u Wer Js dreaming and had a terrible dream that made u shit ur pants… Lolz
Daniel Okoli C commented on the post, Saving Egbo 9 hours, 39 minutes ago
ℓ☺ℓ! Thankee plenty!
olajumoke omisore and topazo are now friends 9 hours, 44 minutes ago
olajumoke omisore posted an update 10 hours, 23 minutes ago
Welcome to my profile. Please check out my work and critique it.
olajumoke omisore commented on the post, Fasting Palava 10 hours, 30 minutes ago
@sambrightomo, this is absolutely hilarious. I like the use of pidgin, it helps the ‘tori’ flow. Welldone.
olajumoke omisore and Mobola are now friends 10 hours, 50 minutes ago