Great concept, fresh and different.

I like how the doctor heard thumps but the MC heard questions.
Interesting piece. Que sera doesnt work for me , niether does worry.
Prayer, planning and gratitude for what i already am, already have ….
Thank […]

Interesting, i liked the’grey beard’ part. Well done.

The pain of unrequitted love.

Thank you boss, your comment is an encouragement.

@Francis thank you, i look forward to your comments because you say it the way you see it. I could have shown the mistreatment but the story is not about mistreatment.
The story is about a disabled child craving […]

@Seun-Odukoya , na honey no get significance abi?
No be you first add honey to dis matter?
Abi the sweetheart dey too watery, no worry I go comot am put anoda one wey sweet pass am.
Why you dey call <a href='http://www.naijastories.com/members/sambrightomo/&#039; […]

Holy fire and holy water. interesting, thanks for sharing.

hmmmm. Thank you for sharing.

Amazing!

Thank you @Olan . I really appreciate that.

Lovely end, poor John Paul.

Whenever I see your posts i know there will be jolly. Thanks. This was fun.

@khadijahmuhammad @chemokopi thank you for your input. I appreciate them. This story is not about a suicide and if that is what it came out as then I failed woefully. It is a stiry about a child that is in pain. […]

Thank you for reading.

@Olajumoke Love and kisses, that was what i was aiming for: a discussiin about people with special needs and being tolerant of those with diabilities. Many times they have smart brains and sweet spirits if only we […]

Thank you @TolaO i was actually exploring what it would be like to have a keen mind locked in a dysfunctional body. Thank you for bothering to read.

Thank you. @sibbylwhyte

Sweetheart @Seun-Odukoya how else was I to get your attention? (In Nikki’s voice)

yes, @koollove , thank you.

Well done @Chemo . OCAOR.

As is the fashion these days let me attempt to mention all the NS Members. If I leave you out pkease remind me, calling 5000 names is not child’s play.
@TolaO @Sibbylwhyte @kaycee @chemokopi @seun-odukoya <a href='http://www.naijastories.com/members/afronuts/&#039; […]

@wendeekay Interesting points.
I have worked with such children and I have a cousin that had Cerebral palsy. Their challenges vary and can improve over time. A brief visit to Google would show you this.
The […]

@Ogaoga I am writing reviews of the Caine Prize Short stoires, would you be interested in those?

loved the spacing and the idea, serious tense issues, yuo write much better than this, was it a draft?

Great concept. It reads like a first draft.
“…did not only have a pretty face but command an intelligent brain” I am sure that isn’t what you meant to write,
well done. Welcome to NS.

Interesting, doesnt read like the title would suggest, well done.