@naboulove: The theme of the story is great and I like that your ‘dream’ end (which I am increasingly getting sick of considering its gathering popularity among writers these days) wasn’t totally bad. I look […]
@naboulove, this is an interesting but I must say, your descriptions made me skipped some parts of the story to get to the real point..
Hope u will have time to revisit this; too much descriptions often kill good […]
@naboulove please continue to keep them aware. The spate at which humans are losing their dignity is depressing. Sex is just one of the expressions of the numerous human feelings, so why the excessiveness?