Thank u, Camp Commandant. We shall try our best…Sir!

Bravo! U indeed got a good grip and never let go till d curtains dropped!!
Well done, u

@Shai, I have actually juxtaposed ur work against d background of prevailing realities in man’s relationship with fellow man. Of course, I supposed u may intend the piece for more of romantic interpretation. But u […]

@Shai, it succeeded in creating (my opinion) a vivid mental picture of man’s seeming inability to trust the other man because of that universally yet unanswered question of ‘what if…?’

Poignantly evocative!

@Lactoo, hehehehehe! kip tryin with dis fyn Felicia gal, and lets knw wen u suksid eventually. Lol

gratias@Igwe.

Thanks@Rasheed, for droppin by. I have actually finished the story. It’s a twenty seven chapters book. I’m presently editing and reediting. And I hope you will like it. Lol

Thanks@Lactoo. Noted

@Kaycee, thnks a bucketful for droppin by. I truly appreciate that you find the opening of my already completed mss interestin. And I would be most obliged to get feed-backs on areas that would need adjustment; as […]

@Sunshine, u said it all: very nice work, though in need of fleshing up in some place.
I saw creativity exploding into a blooming poetic garden here.
Well done, @Dike

Clumsiness…

Tear drops now. My friend actually missed his death on that very flight all thanks to his driver’s clumpsiness. Hmmmm…
RIP to the departed and God’s fortitude upon every bereaved family.
I’m sad…really really sad.

I almost thought I was reading an entry for another competition!
But, seriously, you said it all @ Sueddie; the satisfaction of the author in his/her work should supersede any comment or prize. At NS, there’s […]

NS should have been very categorical about the ‘happy endings’ criteria (because then I suppose everyone would have endeavor to write stories with particularly happy endings).
But it’s all good. There’s always a […]

Epic! Please, develop this further because only an inspired initiate could have glimpsed such an ethereal knowledge to concoct something this ghoulish using the power of words.

I’m an astute advocate of balancing any given equation in whatever garb it rears itself. But as much as it’s ingrained in an averagely sane mortal to want to always relish the suspended feelings of eternal bliss, […]

@Kaycee, which one these really are you sef…editor, writer,reader, critic or…?
@Nnandez, as Kaycee and the others rightly observed, it was a good and funny piece. But an expert editor could still give it the […]

@phoenix, WORD.

@fiyinsiku, the ability to say ‘i’m sorry’ is in itself a rare gift which very few mortals possess. Imagine what our world would be if Nations can harness such gems in their peace intercourse?
Truly, I wasn’t […]

@lancaster, I’m presently toying with the idea of developing it into a full novel. But, writing from a young child’s POV can be tricky, you know.
Again, in the event that I decide to develop it further, I really […]

…Your white teeth, do they test like milk?
Beautiful rendition that left me with the nostalgic feelings one get while reminiscing in an empty space against the picturesque backdrop of a retreating Sun.
Well done.

@mikeeffa, hahahahaha! And ironically, I’ve been actually tryin to ginger myself in dat direction. Anyway, a writer will write always…I may pick up dat challenge someday, one day soon. Thanks for believin in me; […]

@mikeeffa, thank you and God bless. You see, the whole writing thing is very delicate; a simple word of destructive criticism can make an aspiring writer who would have otherwise attain world acclaim to down […]

Indeed you have a story to tell. Nice read.