Thanks @ufuomaotebele

I like using rhymes and rhythm a lot probably because of my music background. Thanks @abdulquadri11

A repentant heart gets forgiveness. Many have treaded this route but still without remorse. It’s a good job you did with your remorseful story. Nice piece

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks @sultan

Thanks @danjuma

Thanks for the advice @kaymillion. I’m glad you liked it.

Thanks for liking the poem @ufuomaotebele. I’m kind of new here but I have previously written two poems titled “If i tell you something” and “Free of bonds and chains”.

Its only God that can save us from bonds and chains…