Mimiadebayo Activity Streams

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Disenchantment 4 days, 5 hours ago

Hmmmm.

This was an okay read. Although there was some unnecessary telling in this story.

Clean up the typos please.
Check this: peaked should be peeked, healed shoes should be heeled

And a few others. […]

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Big ‘Nyansh’ Equals Big Brains – Really? 4 days, 6 hours ago

Lols @Afronuts I can only laugh.

I’m sure deep down you know the answer.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Our Angels 28 4 days, 6 hours ago

Doing great dear!

Thumbs.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, My Master’s Wife 4 days, 7 hours ago

Harsh you’re quite funny.

I don’t see the need for you to be rude.
Almost everyone who’s read this piece has made some valid points. They’re all talking about the same thing The excessive descriptions and the […]

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, I Go Go(4) 1 week, 4 days ago

I wonder who this Queen is y’all are talking about. Lol.

Bibbie this is lovely. Impressive,actually.

You’re doing good. Suspense ain’t bad too.

Keep writing hun.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, The Snare Of God (part 1) 1 week, 4 days ago

This is an okay write. It really does have issues.
Some sentences are too long,no pauses or breaks.
Too much telling too.

Edit better.
Kudos!

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, LEAKED: Topazo almost ruined my day. 2 weeks, 2 days ago

I laughed when I read this.

Fadehan you’re quite a dude..

There’s more fact than fiction here.
I’m glad though that you later saw reason with @topazo. No good critic deliberately maligns someone’s work. […]

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals- 32 2 weeks, 2 days ago

Let’s keep our fingers crossed @bunmiril Thank you for reading.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals- 32 2 weeks, 2 days ago

Thanks dearie for making excuses for us. @Hymar

About the length of the post, make I no punch u oo.
Laziness ke?

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals- 32 2 weeks, 2 days ago

@Jadesola Sorry oo. Abeg no vex I’ll do my best to make the next one longer.
Thanks for being patient.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals- 32 2 weeks, 2 days ago

@schatzilein sorry dear. I’ve just been soooo busy. I’ll try to make the next one longer.
Thank you for following.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals- 32 2 weeks, 2 days ago

@Omoniyi Thank you for stopping by

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals- 32 2 weeks, 2 days ago

@PoshDr Cooooommmmmiiiinnng!

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals- 32 2 weeks, 2 days ago

@vicky Lol more coming. Just a lil patience dear. Thank you for stopping by

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals- 32 2 weeks, 2 days ago

@namdi glad you like it. Thank you for reading.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals- 32 2 weeks, 2 days ago

@Fadehan thank you for reading. I appreciate.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Some Mothers Do Have Them… 2 weeks, 2 days ago

I smiled while reading this because I can relate to these kids.
Recently I spend almost half my day around kids and your examples are spot on.
Kids of these days eh…God help us.
Nice one.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Our Angels 27 2 weeks, 3 days ago

Interesting.
Kudos Jummy.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Stay in Berlin: Part 2 2 weeks, 3 days ago

Less telling and more showing would do. Apart from that, nice story.

Wedding in absentia eh? interesting.

Kudos.

Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Cold Haven 3 weeks, 1 day ago

Thumbs up Harsh.
I like.

@hymar check this out.