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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, "Emotional Jaguda – THIS IS NOT A LOVE STORY! Episode 3" 5 years, 1 month ago
Sweetie, I get what you’re trying to do here. Writing informally et al but please get serious. Pay attention to structure, punctuation and syntax.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Naija Heels on Cobbled Streets 16 5 years, 2 months ago
I think the word you’re looking for instead of “abhors” is “harbours”. Good read as usual Jummy. Funny that the baby should choose this time to show up. Hehehe.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, All over again 5 years, 2 months ago
Simply beautiful…the writing and the story. Well done.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, The Penalty 5 years, 2 months ago
Thank you Sam. We all learn everyday.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, The Penalty 5 years, 2 months ago
Thank you Daramola
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, The Penalty 5 years, 2 months ago
Thank you Kosnie.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, The Penalty 5 years, 2 months ago
Jummy you’re pretty darling at 2nd POV yourself. Thank you for your kind comment. I appreciate. Good to see you on here. By the way I’m silently following NHOCS. Great job.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, The Penalty 5 years, 2 months ago
Hehehehe @H-RATED your comment cracked me up sire. No one is agbaying anyone na. May the best man win. Thank you for your kind comment.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Waiting on Bolaji – Part 2 5 years, 2 months ago
@schatzilein longest time! Missed you and your mouthy comments ooh! Glad to see you on here again. I hope to be around some more darl.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Waiting on Bolaji – Part 2 5 years, 2 months ago
Some crazy Baby Mama drama. Heehehee. This was well written except for teeny-weeny errors that can be handled by thorough editing.
I enjoyed this.
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Mimiadebayo wrote a new post, The Penalty 5 years, 2 months ago
Tribe: Efik found in Cross River and Calabar.
You move to the rhythm, back and forth. Hidden securely behind the brown and black calico of the masque, the color of leopards; you feel the thrill. You know the […]
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Water People 5 years, 2 months ago
Well written, powerful descriptions…a flash in all ramifications. Very good job. These superstitions and cultures sha. I guess we’ve got a lot to learn about the minority tribes in our country. Thumbs up @H-RATED
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Shades Of Deceit III 5 years, 2 months ago
Well written, easy to read. Good Job Dee.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Shades Of Deceit I 5 years, 3 months ago
Okay I really like this. Wow. I’ll follow this definitely. Good job dear.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, The Switch 1 5 years, 3 months ago
Really nice start. Dull end. There’s nothing here to make me wanna read the part two but of course i’m sure you can do better.
Also check this: ‘creeping old woman”, i think you meant ‘creepy’
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, The day she left. Part 1 5 years, 3 months ago
Well, this started off nice but there are quite a lot of things wrong with it. You seem not to have settled for a particular tense because you keep switching between tenses; past, present etc.
And then you also […]
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, The Ghost of Annabelle: Episode One 5 years, 3 months ago
I’m with @afronuts on this you don’t have to show your hand so soon but at least let us get a peek into the mind of the murderer. You told us straight up why he killed his girlfriend when you should’ve been […]
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Naija Heels on Cobbled Streets 12 5 years, 3 months ago
This is going really good Jummy. Where’s the next part?
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Naija Heels on Cobbled Streets 4 5 years, 3 months ago
Does that title still hold,Jummy? I think you’re doing a better job here than I am. I’ve missed this place too. Maybe, just maybe there’s something coming. ;)
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Naija Heels on Cobbled Streets 7 5 years, 3 months ago
Whaaat?? OMG!
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