Beautiful story. Good job, @ufuomaotebele

I also noticed a few grammatical errors. More stringent editing would do your writing a lot of good.

I hope your friend rests in peace. As for the story, it sure has promise and I’m looking forward to the next episode.

Chai! @innoalifa and grammar sha. I think I understand that you enjoyed the piece. Lol.

Yeah. Thanks for dropping by.

Personally, I know of one and my heart breaks each time i see the little girl. Thank you for dropping your thoughts @folakemi. I’m glad you enjoyed the story.

Abi o. I feel a lot of pity for little kids like this. Thanks for reading @shovey

Big trouble! I’m glad you stopped by, @namdi.

Scary but well written. Vivid descriptions; too vivid, in fact, because my heart was racing by the time I finished reading. Good job, writer.

Betrayed his friend just like that. And for what? A romance that might turn out to be fleeting? Not cool! This is a great story. I was spellbound from the first to the last word. Good job, writer.

A really captivating tale. Believable characters plus vivid descriptions. Good job.

Not just you. I also got confused at a point. Really touching story, nonetheless.

Haha! NIce one there. It almost felt like I was watching a movie. Not these wack things we call movies but one of the real things.

Creepy.

Just the words I wanted to write. I guess there’s no point now. Lol.

This is great writing, although you ignored the spacing later in the story. Nonetheless, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Good job, writer.

Excellent writing, I especially love what you did with the rain in the first and last paragraphs.

Okay! I think I’m going to love this. Excellent writing there, writer.

Oh okay. I’m not sure you can edit once your post has been published though. Ask @ogaoga for help.