That silly door
The silly oblong wooden brown door
The silly spot I kept stirring at waiting for it to open
I waited, longed, wished, hoped, prayed that it’d open
Open for my wishes to come true
Open fo […]
Nice story…and the twist? Tushe, I was expecting a better gift of WYWF for Alice. I guess it makes sense to say you should pray for something and not wish seeing that we serve a God not a genie. Kudos!
Nice story line, but some expressions were grammatically incorrect. also notice one or two omissions. A little more patience with editing should do the trick. look forward to reading the second part. Cheers!