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lawore olufemi commented on the post, Woman Without A Face 2 weeks ago

to me message is unclear but i believe with a little polish it could shine.

lawore olufemi commented on the post, Song for the Terrorist 2 weeks ago

thank you all. God will soon heal the land and expose the enemies of this our dear land…Nigeria will be great, I believe…the labours of our heroes shall never be in vain (amen).
let us remember to pray for […]

lawore olufemi wrote a new post, Song for the Terrorist 2 weeks, 2 days ago

They blow their heavy ballistic trumpet

And it sounds to kill some of us

They proclaim they do it for love

A love that can only be felt through sadism
they are death’s co- worker
Sons and […]

lawore olufemi commented on the post, Do you Remember? 3 weeks, 5 days ago

it might be a beta crash cos l-o-v-e is powerful

lawore olufemi commented on the post, Do you Remember? 3 weeks, 5 days ago

tola…thanks for the comment

lawore olufemi commented on the post, Do you Remember? 3 weeks, 5 days ago

correction: ‘Breathtaking night in our secret love diary’ not deepest love diary

thank you all for reading

lawore olufemi commented on the post, Do you Remember? 3 weeks, 5 days ago

it should have been…life has been nothing without you… thanks for the correction

lawore olufemi commented on the post, Do you Remember? 3 weeks, 5 days ago

thanks for the correction but i was unable to edit after submission…i appreciate the comment

lawore olufemi wrote a new post, Do you Remember? 3 weeks, 6 days ago

Do you remember the first day we met?

The sun gave a whooping smile

That exposed the nakedness of the sky

A hi exchanged from four eyes

Emotional words wrapped behind Sounds

And the whispers […]

lawore olufemi commented on the post, Don’t tell me you never knew 1 month ago

thank you for your comments

lawore olufemi commented on the post, If you have her 1 month, 1 week ago

thank you for your comment…exactly what the msg is all about…your wife later on becomes your mother.

lawore olufemi commented on the post, If you have her 1 month, 1 week ago

thanks for reading….i know some men beat their wives, but when you see a woman as your mother, you learn to respect her feelings and again let’s look at it, a virtuous wife is a mother to her husband…all you […]

lawore olufemi commented on the post, Fairy Tales of the Deities… 1 month, 1 week ago

we existed then, they live… we have been there and here only that it took many years for the earth to notice our presence…but now we live, they exist..

lawore olufemi wrote a new post, Fairy Tales of the Deities… 1 month, 2 weeks ago

I was there when Oludumare

Sent Obatala on a journey to this planet

I heard those echoes of words spoken

And moved with the words of creation

Obatala, dressed in supreme white

Moulded and […]

lawore olufemi commented on the post, The New NaijaStories Payment System 1 month, 2 weeks ago

this is amazing, just reading this for the first time after joining several months ago. it is a way of encouraging writers…but what i love about this site is reading great stories and poems from great poets and […]

lawore olufemi commented on the post, MY SOUTHERN LOVE 1 month, 3 weeks ago

this is a love poem and i love it

lawore olufemi commented on the post, SEX WITH MY FATHER 1 month, 3 weeks ago

this is great…nice work.
to me you extended the work with repeated words but i still love it because it still keeps me going on to read… and to finish till the end of the story…it’s a new twist to the […]

lawore olufemi commented on the post, The candle and the flame 2 months ago

thank you all for the comments… seun-odukoya got the poem’s interpretation right and pardon me for the ‘ typographical errors’…also because i couldn’t edit after submitting the poem i was unable to correct […]

lawore olufemi wrote a new post, The candle and the flame 2 months ago

The candle as melted
Burning in slow motion
I watched it burn every second
And watched every second of us
Every second of thoughts and love

I looked as the flames goes
And thought of how we let love […]

lawore olufemi commented on the post, 30km from Gidan-Mangoro and 30 minutes from Lambata. 2 months, 1 week ago

couldn’t finish reading but i love this…you added flavour to the write-up

lawore olufemi commented on the post, In My Lonely Wooden Bed 2 months, 1 week ago

love this poem…’very’ nice poem

lawore olufemi wrote a new post, Everything had a Reason, In my Letter 2 months, 2 weeks ago

Everything had a reason

Your long hair, your eye balls

Your lips, your smell

Body curve, lovely finger nails

Graceful legs, attractive sole feet

All was designed to make you a […]

lawore olufemi commented on the post, YOU BROKE ME INTO YOU. 2 months, 2 weeks ago

the poem is a life scenario… it happened to a couple…they first broke up and later got married to become one of the best couples in my church… so, I’m narrating what happened.. that is why the first verse […]

lawore olufemi wrote a new post, YOU BROKE ME INTO YOU. 2 months, 2 weeks ago

You broke my golden heart

You broke my gorgeous looks

You broke my soothing emotions

You broke my awesome hope

You broke my loving faith

You broke my wonderful smile

And then,

You broke my […]

lawore olufemi commented on the post, Come and hear a proverb 2 months, 2 weeks ago

I thank you guys for your wonderful comments… You have giveN me the Strength to carry on

lawore olufemi commented on the post, Come Away With Me 2 months, 3 weeks ago