hmmm…quite an insightful story.Needed a few editing work and a couple of well structured English here and there.
But besides that, was nice. Although I wished I knew why a girl(age unknown) will go to such […]
hmmm interesting tale…although I had to do the punctuations myself…and paragraphs would have made reading, a lot more enjoyable.
There are however some comparisons that crested my brows…
a woman’s tummy […]