Hehehe @kwiksie. I think its more of a duty we owe ourselves; to read, review, correct and commend each others work, so as to improve and grow together as a family. After all, that’s why we are here – to help ourselves.
I support that @uzywhyte
and @kwiksie i like this part alot,its kind of funny;
”In situations such as these;
Because while they still barely know your name
You’ve decided the wedding date – and named your kids.”
@kwiksie, the best thing about this free verse is the honesty about it. There is a childlike candour, a positive repudiation of self, its almost breathtaking. I love good, simple pieces, this is one of those. […]