Lovely tale you’ve got here but the lack of proper paragraphing did not make it easy on the eyes atal. You need to watch out for that in subsequent installments.

I think Anita was too quick to conclude that Austin didn’t love her.
Whilst Austin was also quick to deduce that she was cheating on him. Nicely written installment.
I’m going to be following this tale.

Nicely written. Love your use of adjectives and the way you started at the begining, it all made it a great read..
Fine boy Corper is definately in deep Sh*t.

Oh mine!! Nothing hurts more than family betrayal. Vinny should punch some sense into his brother’s head. You don’t mess with your guy’s girl talkless of your Bro’s and get away with it.

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Land of Moaning and Hustling. Welcome to Eko.
#ShineYourEyes

Time didn’t raped. innocence. Puberty did.

Good read. Tis very rear to see faithful men nowadays.

I like this he took out the brother and chef. Although the chef should have know better than to blackmail someone with enough guts to kill his brother. Nicely written. Welldone.

Nice! We’ll told. I was caught in this web too and it wasn’t pretty. So unfortunate Desmond couldn’t break free in time

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Funny read. Late coming. has really eaten deep into his persona.

Hmmm He sure would never forget Vals day and to think that an army barracks was close by.
Nice one.

Nice and well written. This reminded of an encounter I once had in Agege market years back. I was buying oranges from a young woman and as she was peeling it I started seeing urine dropping to to floor from […]

This very nice. Love the free flowing dialogue between Pete and Grace. Welldone.
Staying glued for subsequent episode.

Nicely written. I’m seriously hoping for a continuation.

I agree. you left us hanging way too early and still we don’t know the direction it’s taking although I thought it was quite funny.
Do well to redeem youself in subsequent installment.

I agree. you left us hanging way too early and still we don’t know the direction it’s taking although I though it was quite funny.
Do well to redeem youself in subsequent installment.

Hmm!! I don’t know what to make out of this installment but one thing is sure Tis going to be a superb piece.
Booking my seat and clamouring for more.

… and the plot thickens. Had to exhume myself out of ghost mode for this one. When is this world ever going to close the gaps created by our social differences? Nice story though and pls brush up on your […]