Sima, this is the only work by you that I’ve read and wow! You gave nothing away free without a charge, the price of carefully thinking about those 2 ending lines to each stanzas. You’re really good with word play Sima.
Yesssssssssssss! Something as simply as this but yet so delicious! I think you picked your words carefully and when to have the characters say them. This piece is barely 250 words long but it’s really beautiful. […]
I just wished each line was tighter with better usage of words. And is this suppose to be a poem? Sounded like questions any one without any writing skills would ask. The term “crime” doesn’t suit some of the […]