Nice story line… indeed Naija mums are yet to know the difference between home and away. Kudos. Ditto on the typos.

I quite understand the angle which the poet is coming from. This message is not just for the primary school pupils but for everybody. If only you know @Kaycee.

I most especially like the title “Raging calm.” They are two contrasting words which you were able to properly blend together to make a whole lot of sense. Nice one.

Nice, nice and… nice! Loved reading.

When I read the first part, I thought “wow” and said “this is gonna be the peak of it.” After reading this part, I became speechless and this got me thinking “so naija person still fit write this kind stuff?” Guy, […]

The girl might not have been threatened to continue with the sex after the first time. She could have been promised some other things like marriage. Something like this happened to a friend of mine, so l can […]

A friend or lover you say? Hmm, if all friends were to be helpers to all that desires… then there will be no problem of … Not me, I only seconded @Adams oh.

During the course of reading, I had to start piecing it all together myself which ought not to be. The story line was kind of going back and forth and I particularly didn’t understand what happened at the end. […]

As for asking a man for fees when due… I wouldn’t totally agree to that. I ask my mum then she knows how to ask her husband! In all, a man is he who is able to stand by his word and accepts responsibility for […]

It depicts what happens in most homes these days, where the man leaves the woman at home without considering the fact that she would rather be somewhere else at times. I like this poem. Well done.

Bravo Mr. Poet. I like the line which read “his likes never come twice.”

Lover boy, nice composition.

@Stelzz, I will try and do justice to that. Thanks for the comment.

@Kaycee, thanks elder. This means so much to me. At last I got you to like my work (heaving a sigh of relief). Phew!

@gooseberry, tried it severally and reached same result. E no easy oh. The stress of holding the bottle in place alone, not to talk of positioning your thing!… try it out if you’re a girl.

Thanks for liking it and being an eye opener to the hidden meanings of it.

Poem is evidently well writen but I got bored on the long run (didn’t mean to sound harsh). Please make it clearer and more fun.

Nice story line… why did he have to die now?

Good poem.

I liked the part where Deola used sarcasm. Enjoyed reading. Expecting the next part so please make it soon.

Nice one… I guess you’ve been doing this before now because this is more than an attempt. So clear and almost visible.

@Eletrika and @Chemo. This dare actually happened on Sunday so I kind of typed as it flowed through my mind and immediately uploaded before I developed a cold feet… Will carry out the needed adjustments. <a href='http://www.naijastories.com/members/seun-odukoya/&#039; […]

“Mamayowe” I understand this but I will like to know the meaning of”Okporunwanvie’ please … In all, you were able to blend Benin language with English accurately and this brought about a splendid result. […]