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jollyone wrote a new post, Tell 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Tell of the sighs and tears
Tell about the constant fear
that grips the chest like the hug of the Anaconda
Loosening the anus
in tune to the report of guns big and small.

Tell it Baga, tell it Yoyo
Tell of […]

jollyone commented on the post, Quarter to Eleven 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Chai, I am heart-broken! How can? You did not even leave one survivor for us to commiserate with and put all his family’s hopes in! I love those names he characters had (I love northern Nigerian languages) and the […]

jollyone commented on the post, Dear Sam Bright Omo 6 months, 3 weeks ago

I inhaled its fragrance,
Its lush words that
Filled my aching spaces
With the scent of approval
And
Consolation.

Bravo! Such grace, such warmth as promotes peace and community. I have had poems written for […]

jollyone commented on the post, Nicole Bassey 7 months ago

“The soul, a plethora of
Riches like that ancient Queen of Sheba
The riches, a pool of artistry
And aesthetic splendour, ganished
With the capacity to forge classics
Like a skilled wordsmith” I love these […]

jollyone commented on the post, April Featured Writer Efadel – I Write to Live 7 months, 3 weeks ago

Ahaa! Busy bee, please keep writing, I enjoy reading from you. Congratulations!

jollyone commented on the post, A Book Unread 9 months, 1 week ago

You are very right about the fickle part. Yes, live and let live.

jollyone commented on the post, Mommy’s Gone Again 9 months, 1 week ago

Thank you @lelouch

jollyone commented on the post, Mommy’s Gone Again 9 months, 1 week ago

Yes. I was referring to that also. I meant you deciphered my allusion to jungle book. Yes, its about motherly love, the absence of it.

jollyone commented on the post, Mommy’s Gone Again 9 months, 1 week ago

@Jaywriter, you decipher?

jollyone commented on the post, The Boy Inside 9 months, 2 weeks ago

‘I need a friend- He said.
To talk with,play with and be freeto tell my fears’
that’s the ultimate search we are all on.

jollyone commented on the post, The Funeral 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Hmmm…salt indeed! Interesting topic.

jollyone commented on the post, Last Prodigal 9 months, 2 weeks ago

This required a bit more concentration but it was worth it. Well done!

jollyone commented on the post, The Diary of the Girl who couldn’t Talk 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Well done! The areas needing improvement have been mentioned already and I’m sure you’ll take to them.

jollyone commented on the post, BAA BAA BLACK SHEEP (renewed) 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Ahn Ahn! Why would you let the darling, unassuming sheep know he’s been cheated? Are you Wikileaks?

jollyone commented on the post, Happy Ending, No Loneliness Like Mine,Temptation,Folded Soul. 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Good one, @khadijahmuhammad. @chemokopi, keep up with the constructive criticism.

jollyone commented on the post, Okpu-Achi 9 months, 2 weeks ago

I am so into this! Are those place names or terms? I feel like I’m missing out by not knowing the meaning. These lines will mean more if I know what they mean, won’t they? ‘Ishimokoto river
That deafens the […]

jollyone commented on the post, Mirror 9 months, 2 weeks ago

What did I want?
Only to be your mirror, be with you.
To traverse the earth with you
To conquer and grow old with you
All I wanted was you

jollyone commented on the post, Mirror 9 months, 2 weeks ago

What did I want?
Only to be with you.
To traverse the earth with you
To conquer and grow old with you
All I wanted was you

jollyone commented on the post, Will I Still Love? 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Yes you will, in good time but you allowed to wonder. Beautiful!

jollyone commented on the post, Counting Matra 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Yes! Twinkle while you can. Why wait?