Tai Fasina, I like the the idea behind the prologue: I read chapter 1a before realising that there is a prologue. After reading the prologue and chapter 1a, I’ll say that you have a story to tell- a good one. A […]

Extra note: Why did Julia leave Bode the way she did? I’m curious…I’ll wait and see if you will satisfy my curiousity. Will Bode ever know why? Did he ever try to find out?

I can feel the pain of Bode as I travel through his past to the present to see who he has become- thanks to you Dee. Great style and and ability to paint a picture so well with your descriptions. Thanks for […]

This is a well written piece from a mind that sees events in Kodak clear colours, or may I say Fototek clear colours. Funpen, this is my first reading of any of your posts, and I drawn in by your ability to carry […]

True talk Nalongo. Thanks.

Thanks Cyndy Ernest for reading my piece. I am honoured by you all.

Thanks Sir Sam- Really encouraging.

Thanks Funpen. I’ll revise more often now. Thanks for your comments and eye for syntax. I’ll keep an eye out for you.

Thanks Kay Greins. It was an oversight that i will work to correct immediately. Thumbs up for your time and diligent reading.

Thanks Ajenifuja Adetokunbo. I appreciate your time.

Thanks six. I appreciate you taking the time to go thru my piece.