Wanna Be there when our skin is frail
Beauty gone and we both looking pale
Those unwritten lines of wrinkles
Old age, as our skin shrinkles.
I wanna be there holding hands
Sharing smiles that only us […]
yeah it read good ur way, i noticed the changes.
That line “friend cry as much as u can”
i was just trying to rhyme and i guess i ended up murdering reason on the alter of rhyming.
Thank u mehn for ya input