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JAY'S PLANET commented on the post, D I A M O N D S 7 years, 11 months ago
Flamboyant, yet simple. I like!!!
“Now that I stay around in still awe of your fire,
This clear glare of a thousand thousand-carat diamonds”
Great.
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JAY'S PLANET commented on the post, Of Lovers and Cheaters 7 years, 11 months ago
Wow…Lines Like A Movie!!! Kudos.
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JAY'S PLANET commented on the post, When It’s Dark 8 years, 4 months ago
:|
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JAY'S PLANET commented on the post, Three Voices 8 years, 4 months ago
Thanks guys.
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JAY'S PLANET commented on the post, Son of a Beach 8 years, 4 months ago
Hey :-) I like the poet’s response. He pasted as directed by the muse.
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JAY'S PLANET commented on the post, Measuring Waves 8 years, 8 months ago
Thanks my great NS friends. Yeah, I think I like the second poem more.
@Chimzorom, you are right about the theme of betrayal in the second poem. -
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JAY'S PLANET are now friends 8 years, 9 months ago
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JAY'S PLANET commented on the post, Woman 8 years, 9 months ago
Wow, I thought this was off the publishing list. Yeah @sibbylwhyte it was a stroke of luck :-) Thanks all for liking.
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JAY'S PLANET commented on the post, Fourteenth Step 8 years, 10 months ago
Gratias friends. You keep me going. :-)
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JAY'S PLANET commented on the post, A Baker's Wish 8 years, 10 months ago
Thanks for reading/commenting. I’m glad you all like my poem. :-)
@Chi, yea I’ve been here. -
Pearls Of Wisdom…YoungRevelation and
JAY'S PLANET are now friends 8 years, 11 months ago
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Chetachi and
JAY'S PLANET are now friends 8 years, 11 months ago
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Femi Eros and
JAY'S PLANET are now friends 8 years, 11 months ago
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Sueddie Agema and
JAY'S PLANET are now friends 8 years, 11 months ago
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JAY'S PLANET wrote a new post, When The Green Storm Calms 8 years, 11 months ago
(Year 2040)
Aging is like taking a cool evening walk through a garden, with sweet scents caressing your olfactory senses and not being able to pluck any of the beautiful flowers.
I am a happy man still.And […]
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JAY'S PLANET wrote a new post, For A Belle 9 years, 2 months ago
I’m a man.
A young man with daring desires,
And burning blood in my virile veins.
My stream of emotions overflows with thoughtsOf your dark hair, velvet skin and piercing eyes.
Oh, those vibrating […]
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JAY'S PLANET wrote a new post, Last Wave 9 years, 2 months ago
The beach basked in awe,
The sun smiled to all.
We’ll soon walk the shore
Hands clasped for sure
One last horse ride,
To calm the tension within.
The two of us
Stroking Amanda’s mane.
Ware […]
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JAY'S PLANET wrote a new post, Saro Wiwa's Waiting War 9 years, 2 months ago
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JAY'S PLANET commented on the post, Army Arrangement 9 years, 4 months ago
Thanks for reading. I appreciate :-)
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